The Comanche Way

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Towahwi did well as a horse breeder, and built an actual house and a ranch on the plot he was granted by the Dawes Act of 1887. When he told Melody about his plan, she said she could be happy living in a tipi but if he wanted a house, he should build a house. Towahwi stroked Melody's swollen belly and smiled.

"One grandmother and one child in a tipi with us is fine. Two children are bearable. The baby inside you will be too many. My wife needs a house for our children and their grandmother."

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Together, Towahwi and Melody had four children, two boys and two girls. Towahwi taught his sons to be strong, brave men their father and grandfathers would be proud of. Melody taught her daughters to be good wives and mothers that both her white mother and her Comanche mother, Running Fawn, would be proud of.

At that point in their lives when girls become women, both Melody's daughters asked her how they would know when they loved a man, and Melody did what any good Comanche mother would do. She told them the same thing Running Fawn had told her many years before.

"A woman takes a husband to help her do things she can not do by herself and to give her children. A woman can always attract a man, but she will look for a man who will do those things because he cares for her. She will do the things he can not do because she cares for him. It is the Comanche way."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

The arrows. Lol.

Peapod41Peapod413 months ago

My education was enhanced by this wholly believable stoty. Thank You!

linnearlinnear4 months ago

Wonderful read.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Thank you!!!! You have a gift. I appreciate your writings. Excellent.

ArkSoutherngentArkSoutherngent5 months ago

Another Great Story, especially the Western stores. You are definitely the Louis L'Amour of Literotica...!!!

OmenainenOmenainen5 months ago

Thank you for participating in my event!

ramysamy7ramysamy75 months ago

Another good (or better) read. I tend to look forward to your detective/crime stories, but I’ve come to realize that you are the best at the Western I’ve read in the last decade. And I’m not just talking about Lit.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy5 months ago

Thanks for another great story!

5

des911des9115 months ago

Excellent, as always.

ZoomdoggieZoomdoggie5 months ago

Keep this up and you’ll become an honest to god storyteller.

My only concern is you don’t write as fast as I can read. I’ll have to start over from the beginning.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very well done, I'm part Blackfoot on my father's side, and heard many a story of the type of people that my ancestors are!! Unfortunately very little is written about family history! Everything was passed by word of mouth!!

KachinaDollKachinaDoll5 months ago

I am constantly amazed that you can produce two or three stories a week and still maintain such high standards. Where on earth do you find the time? 5*

Flar1958Flar19585 months ago

You are one of a few very good writer, a raretity on LIT! Hope to read many more of these stories.

It's sad you can only vote 5* you deserve more

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Always amazed at how many stories you write that contain detailed background to go with the romance story. Applause.

woodrangewoodrange5 months ago

you do these bi-cultural stories very well with respect for tradition. 5 stars

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