All Comments on 'The Driver'

Absolutely brilliant story, extremely well crafted and executed. I am so glad that Ronald was able to forgive Sarah. He truly loved her.

Changed my rating from 3 to 5 because this was a great story and written well.

Sara is still a piece of shit that has a lot to make up for.

She pawned an asshole's spawn off on Ronald and instead of confiding in him about getting raped and the blackmail, she lets the asshole have her again and enjoyed the hell out of it.

She would have enjoyed it yet again if Ronald hadn't intervened.

This would have been far better had Ronald taken the time to sample some other woman and if they had actually had a child of their own.

Great writing and just missed being a terrific story.

I enjoyed the writing. However, I didn't like the three mistakes that Ronnie made. First, as another person pointed out, don't get involved with a sub if you're not into the D/s scene. A real sub would never be truly happy in a vanilla relationship. Secondly, marrying a woman that you knew, at the time, didn't love you AND was pregnant with another man's baby. (That means she was cheating on him while they were dating, in my book.) Thirdly, taking her back. I could forgive the first time due to the date rape drug. But she went back again and again and enjoyed it. She even was smiling in the picture. It's one thing to have the horns hung on you by subterfuge and decent. But, to continue to have sex, especially oral sex, with a cheater after suspicions or with evidence provided is nasty. You don't know if they used condoms or if you're getting sloppy seconds or thirds. Plus you're hanging the horns on yourself then. Just my personal opinion. I'm not a RAAC person.

Your wife fools you into bringing up another man's child, has a history of allowing a guy to fuck her in front of his friends and be led around naked on a lead ....and you go to bat for her? Well written BUT no self respecting man would have a wife with her history .3u

I am tired of guys making love to their wife after someone else has . I guess I am not into Seconds like they are

I had problems with the first couple of pages - I'm pretty sure Robert and Ronald got mixed up in conversation a few times, and in the section of the wife there were mixes of first and third person. The story sounds like it could be pretty good, but it didn't grab me right away and with the percieved mix ups I stopped. I didn't 'one bomb' it, I just didn't vote. Maybe I'll come back and try it again at a later date.

Another great tale - well done lad! 5*

Excellent storyline, well written and a really enjoyable read. I noticed an anon comment where the writer said hey can't stand stories where the husband fucks the wife after someone else has as in this story. If they are a married man and their wife is in her twenties when they married then unless they've been together since she was 14 then it's very likely that she has fucked other men before him. Lol

Incredulous. The lying deceitful, lover of public sexual humiliation turns to wife, mother of the year and uber successful business leader. She maintains her new found virtue for 20 years when the fates conspire to have her drugged and raped, blackmailed into submissive adultery which she loves. But she manages to find the strength to resist consensual sex. And finds the courage to confess all to her loving husband who also happens to be the direct cause of her lover's hideous disfigurement and ultimate demise.

The only predictable and consistent character in this story is Robert the rich, arrogant, power crazed sociopath.

writingstyle 5/5

content 1/5

the logic of his decisions ...

Plot 2/5

mentioned several times. People don´t change like this after all this time. Esp. after they behaved like this for so long

way too long wacko story - 1*

I would not give an easy out like suicide for Bobby. I would want him to suffer for the rest of his life. People will be able to see he as ugly outside as he is inside

You should have stopped writing. This was really bad. Many commenters pointed out the flaws in your plot and the long, confusing story you wrote.

I waited several months then reread the story. Perhaps I was too harsh in my comments. To be brief, wonderful, talented writer, awful story.

Riveting story, with a good varied cast of characters from the evil, arrogant, narcissist to a quiet scheming husband and a wife who had struggled with her desires for a long time but finally ended up happy with her husband now aware of them.

A well-planned story of revenge and rehabilitation, beautifully presented. 5* all the way.

5 Stars - it was an interesting tour on your way to a RAAC. However, you pulled off a reasonable and well thought out way to make it appear justified. Well done and a pleasure to read.

I am a mechanic by trade, but started on mach 2 fighter jets, but my most cherished ride was a 1969 Camaro. Man, I loved that car and it broke my heart to have to sell it. I fool around with Honda cars now, but I really hate the electronic throttle (worst idea ever). I am going to replace it with a cable ASAP. Next, I will attack the computer. There is a local company that has made amazing strides with Corvette LS3 engines, converting them for aircraft use. Now I could really get into something like that.

Thank you for writing this great story. 5 star from me.

Great read. Well done. Thank you.

Five stars from me.

Loved it!

Thank you for your brilliant story, I could only give it 5*. Keep writing I love the British style of telling a tale.

It's unusual to find a British writer on this site but a story about my home town is a rare treat. It brought back memories of fighting my frankly dangerous Escort BDA on Hartside as a callow youth. Thank you Mr Peel

Simply superb!

One of the very best stories on this site. Well done DeYaKen.

Damn man, chilling!

Super!!! 5/5

I still on the first page, pondering continuing. But this occurred to me:

Bobby Shaftoe went to sea. Silver buckles on his knee. (Etc.)

JPB

5* The back and forth between the different characters' perspectives worked very well for me as your story unfolded step by step.

Thank you for a gripping story which kept me hooked until the end.

Now that was a damned good tale.

The author's best story by far. I felt quite sorry for both the MC and his wife. She was slipped Rohpynol and raped her first time with Robert at a conference. She had not seen him in 23 years and they had a dinner with a few drinks. A heinous crime. She took action to get a morning after pill. As an aside, she should have gone to the hospital to check for the drugs, the half life is MUCH longer than author's on this site realize and modern medical diagnostics means it (and even X) can be detected anywhere from several days (X) to more than five days for Rohpynol. But most writers don't know that so I give that a pass here. Then it was clear Robert blackmailed her regarding that night. He had a picture of her giving him a blowjob. Ivan found his emails. We know that she was scared. Yes her body reacted to it as Robert dominated her (first time in 23 years) and she tried to fight it at first and said no repeatedly but he took her anyways and yes she enjoyed and orgasmed. Orgasms are a physical response to stimulation. Her mind went back to thr dark places when she was in college with Robert. Given that she was being raped, yes blackmail sex is rape!, she took pleasure as a way to survive it mentally, reawakening that college obsession. Remember why she almost left Robert the first time. He ordered to suck another man's cock. She refused. She absolutely would have refused here with Robert but was bring dominatef not only physically but also mentally and emotionally with the blackmail sex. She had nowhere to go and forced into she took pleasure in it. That is more a defense mechanism than a crime. The human psyche is complex and she was sick and vomiting at 2 am and wracked with guilt when Robert had finished his sick dominance. Afterwards she was adamant never again but was confused also that she enjoyed it. Not in the same way she does with Ronnie who is a better lover but in the dark desires that she had kept chained since college. When confronted again in person and via email, she learned Robert had more photos. At this point she had resolved to tell him off. He added to the blackmail with using his position on thr board of the company to get her investigated and fired. She resolved one more time, thr very last, and certainly the dark desires that had awakened played a role in her decision, not just fear of losing her marriage and losing her job. One could say this is the first time she planned to cheat on her husband, except that is pushing things given the heavy blackmail. Should she have gone to Ronnie at that point? Yes. But she was under severe emotional stress and some old urges like a long forgotten drug addiction were putting pressure on her also. Though she went to the hotel, she realized her fantasies were not of Robert but of Ronald. He was who she wished would be there that night to dominate her. When she imagined his crying face, she bolted. By the description she was probably there at most 30-45 minutes before she made her decision to not only see Robert but to tell him to do his worst, both calling him and texting him. At that moment he was still on the road after dinging his car and be questioned by the police. As an aside, her call distracted him and out him into the field and hospital. The point is in that short time she decided to break it off, confess to Ronald with no way to prove what happened taking a huge chance and quitting her job to remove the blackmailer's power, effectively defanging him and doing what she should have done before she went to Carlisle. Of course the husband knew because stupid Robert baited him by email to try to het him to kick her out and divorce her. He did that soon after the second time with her and had a photo. The husband took immediate and decisive action. Starting a serious BTBastard campaign having identified his enemy early. He was completely prepared to divorce her but she made the right decision. They deserved a reconciliation and I applaud that they did not degenerate into loveless dominant bandage sex to try to replace Ronald's lovemaking with Robert's sick shit. Neither could do that. The fact that Anthony was Robert's child is a wash. Yes she lied and didn't love him at the beginning when they got married but he knew that, knew he could not have children without surgery and lied to her. His actions in hiding his sterility prevented them from having more children. That fucking sucks. Yes he wanted a confession but so what. Get tested, break the ice, reconcile and get surgery to have more kids. That was unlike his affirmative approach to burning Robert. Ivan's perspective on things was interesting. I thought the kiddie porn stuff was way over the top. Robert would already commit suicide after seeing his face. The simulated rape scene was hard to take at the start from the wife's perspective even if we knew who it was, she was terrified it was Robert and fought hard at first. Fortunately she realized it was Ronald and thought it was a goodbye fuck. Her responses afterwards were heartbreaking as she did not want to remember him that way. Honestly considering what happened to her in college for three years wirh Robert and getting pregnant and not loving Robert ar the start of their marriage, she was remarkably strong and brave. Maybe not the smartest as one should always go on offense and come clean when confronted with blackmail unless physical harm against husband or kids is imminent (or maybe framed for felony and jail time or complete financial ruin, if say one time for the latter), but she was under had been raped, setup by her ex, and under enormous emotional strain. She survived. And husband took action and got information and verified her story. Great and creative reconciliation. This is not a RAAC. This a well constructed and inspiring reconciliation especially near the end. Kudos!

An earlier commentator had concerns that I share. There is a big difference between BDSM play and rape. BDSM play is ultimately a consensual activity. It is governed by pre-established limits on the activities to take place and the use of safe words/gestures. The BDSM community exorcizes any member who violates the limits established by the submissive and would never condone forcing a submissive into sexual activity simply because she/he had engaged in that activity with a prior partner. The husband's assault on his wife is misguided, foolhardy, dangerous and illegal. The story should make that clear. The author obviously has that responsibility. By publishing the story, Literotica now does as well.

One of the better stories on this site. Numerous levels of emotions and complex situations where there's no clear cut answers. Well done.

very good story. to me though, there was a lot of unnecessary "prose" wording. I.E., all the descriptive words of the views, countryside etc. I was more interested in the aftermath from Sarah's life from college until the present. Still, a very good story

Nice tail, complex and rich

Well written story, keeps your attention from star to finish.

Both of them need deep therapy for a long time... they are sick and insane... nothing good will come of the relationship.

There is no honor in being a cuckold and forgiving her cheating and lies shows no self-respect only cowardice, and his actions also reflect that he only reinforced her self-entitlement and narcissistic traits. She will cheat again and again, as soon as the opportunity presents itself. Well written but I detest any notion of forgiving a lying cheating slut wife, it represents no virtue, or honorable male characteristic and serves only to further humiliate and disgrace all men

With a wife like her, who needs enemies..

Umm she was drugged and raped the first time. Blackmailed and forced the second. Ready to tell the asshole off the third time when he upped the ante on the blackmail to financial damage and ruin her career. At this point she should have just walked. Robert is a monster. She instead premeditated to cheat (really the first time) in order to get out of Robert's control. She was still being blackmailed and heavily coerced. However of her own according while in the hotel while asshole was "delayed", she decided to end it and tell him to fuck off. That took guts. She told the blackmailer and rapist to go stuff himself and was ready for the consequences. So where exactly is the cheating? The first time was NOT cheating. He was drugged. The second time was not cheating. Blackmail sex is rape. She had no time , thought her marriage was in trouble, she was extremely reluctant and he still forced her that second time both physically and emotionally with the blackmail. Again she had no time to seek help. Where I can see a real issue is when the third threat is delivered. The blackmail is more extreme, but she has time to get help or divert. The penalty is worse, likely divorce (because what can she prove that she was raped TWICE!) and loss of her career and maybe even jail time or at least in disgrace in her sector. But here she has time. She premeditated. She plans to do it one more time. The first two times there was no real escape. This time she should have realized the asshole won't stop. Forget the orgasms. People can orgasm when raped if the rapist takes their time. It doesn't mean SHIT. It is a physical response. Ok some dark crap in her psyche from college was reopened. It did NOT define her actions. She fantasized about her husband in that hotel room (not provable sadly). She did.plan to cheat to minimize damage. And she hated Robert. She realized she had to stop and saw her husband's face crying (in her mind). She walked and sent the text to asshole that ended up getting him into the hospital near death. She is lucky because she was able to prove pieces of her story and her husband with help from Ivan after asshole alerted him early by sending the damning kompramat material of her fucking him, was able to get the inside scoop on the drugging and blackmail. Without proof, she would have a hard time to reconcile with her husband. But she told asshole to do his worst when she left the hotel. She was willing to risk it. It was destroying her and their marriage. So yeah she technically had an intent to cheat under coercion but had time to get help, BUT she backed out and told the blackmailer to fuck off. How then is the third time cheating oh wise BTB trolls? Get off the Old Testament crap. Granted without the proof of what asshole did to attack their marriage and rape and blackmail her, if the blackmail material just came out of nowhere, then they would probably have gotten a divorce and she would have been unjustly crushed. But their was verifiable proof and that changes everything. The last remaining part was dealing with her dark buried desire to be dominated and they handled that in a weird crazy way when hubby basically assaulted her and she thought it was a goodbye fuck. They survived. They made it. Case closed. All a divorce does is let the raping asshole win. As it is the wages of his sin are death.

Very good story, Five stars, without a doubt. Thanks, DYK, I loved it, thanks for sharing.

Too long for a RAAC.

Good stories but the premeditated whore got away to easy she even got a reword. Maby the woman who wrote this story was a cheater who got cought and didn't come out so good.

Good story well written with lots of content to pull you in. Thanks for the hard work. 5*

Good story with a justifiable reconciliation. Everyone got what they deserved.

I quit reading before I finished the first chapter... the absurd alpha male behavior killed the whole thing...

Is it me or does this story make no sense?

The first time we learn that Ron is going to do something about Robert is when he visits Dan Pritchard (pg4) and borrows his Land Rover.

Next we have the scene in the Wear Valley. Ron gets Robert annoyed by getting in front of him and driving at the speed limit. Robert is intent on getting to Carlisle to have sex with Ron’s wife so he becomes angry.

Through a series of expert driving maneuvers, Ron arrives in front of Robert but facing him on the other side of the road.

Robert, driving recklessly downhill, encounters a sharp turn. At that moment Ron arrives at the same place and turns on his headlights and light bar while crowding the road.

Robert swerves to avoid a collision and ends up in a horrendous accident. Ron’s comment to the event: “that wasn’t supose to happen. He had plenty of room to get past me.” He concludes that Robert is a bad driver and shouldn’t be driving a fancy Jag 120.

However subsequently we learn that Ron’s wife, Sarah, was calling Robert to tell him she wasn’t going to have sex with him.

Robert’s crash was actually caused by his inattention to the road. His cell phone had fallen to the floor of the passenger side of the Jag and he was trying to retrieve it when the sharp turn appeared. Whether Ron was there or not was of no consequence.

If Sarah had not called at the exact instant that Robert was entering the sharp curve, the accident might have been avoided as Ron himself mused. Robert would either pull over to retrieve his phone or drive on to Carlisle. Either way he would not meet Sarah.

But most importantly, whatever Ron’s plan was, which was never actually revealed, had little to do with the accident. It appears to me that while the description of Ron’s auto handling skills was interesting, whether he was on that road that evening or not seems irrelevant to the story.

Whether Ron and Sarah reconcile or not would be anti-climactic.

So, Sarah is all good because Ron performs BDSM on her?... what a hokey ending... what someone with her maladjusted submissive personality needs is years of heavy counseling... her gullibly naive and delusional husband will not save her from herself no matter the narrative you try to submit to.

One of the author's best stories. Much more complex than many commenters appear to realize. This was not RAAC. It was a well earned but tough reconciliation. McIntyre was a monster.

You write really good stories, this one was a beauty.

Scores 5/5

Definitely 5

But I dunno about her...She said the bodysuit and all the sexy lingerie she bought was for Ronald but she was taking it in a bag while going to meet Robert. If Robert hadn't been late she would have fucked him. What would stop her from doing it again? He could just threaten to tell her husband and she'd fly right back to him. But the MC was far too vanilla. If she likes some harder BDSM why cant he just give her kinks a shot. Im sure he has some weird sex stuff too, we all do. He's being selfish.

Suspense, mystery, and thrilling. Like a detective story in reverse... (Karma vs Kismet?)