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Giving a disgusted sigh, he turned back towards the sliding glass door, still on the other side of the railing. He thought maybe if he didn't look it would be easier. However, seeing the door just a few feet away was giving him second thoughts. Before he could change his mind, he let go with his hands, thrusting them out to his sides. He fell backwards until he was almost horizontal, and then he was free.
He was completely in the air, feeling the wind rushing past him as he plummeted to the rocks below. Suddenly, there was a bright light and he felt an invisible force catch his body. Then everything went dark.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agore OpenWords: It's called 'survivor's guilt' for a reason. If I were to sort thru my many boxes of crap I call 'precious memories', I'd find a photo taken in Pat O'Brian's restaurant during my service days. Of the four men, I was the only one still alive two years later. Tommy had only 3 weeks to live before being murdered. Was I special? Did their parents love them any less than mine? They were all good friends and I wasn't responsible for their deaths or keeping them alive. I thought. 'That could'a been me,' Never, 'That should'a been me.' Therein lies the road to suicide, via noose, gun, drugs or alcohol. 5 stars for the side story alone.
Anon56
OpenWordsabout 1 year agoStupid... Who the hell would want somebody weak enough to commit suicide to be one of their pilots?
UncertainTover 2 years agoWho would have thought an erotic novel would be harbouring a complex and fully developed sci-fi fantasy novel inside itself. 5*
JC_The_Continuerover 7 years agoThe story lives on under my page. Check it out if you want
JC
Anonymousover 10 years agoAka the author is what we Scots call a 'heid ra ba'. But if he's got the cajones tae eat a mutton pie at Ibrox we'll gurd oor claidmohrs an' shag thae B'Amuf divers ;-)
MrWinteralmost 11 years agoWhile I find Michael as a character to be extremely implausible and too perfect (Just the way I like my protagonists.) I think everything else in the world is a very realistic depiction of how things would be. I especially appreciate that you had the cabby turn off the meter, that was just a nice little thing you had him do.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI have to say, this is a pretty good series so far, it has slowed down a bit(maybe i'm just bored... damn adhd), but hopefully in the next few chapters it picks up.
Csharpeover 11 years agoI started and read all 11 chapters in a row. You need to write more - they are interesting and have a good plot pacing.
Anonymousover 11 years agoread yesterday... came back and read again today, WHERES CH 12!!!??!?!?!
katgoddess1over 11 years agoPandora must want James Merrick alive, although he may not be too pleased when he first wakes up. Is this the man that she mentioned to Michael?
sqheadgermanover 11 years agoGr8 story. More plz. 70 yr. old reader, retired military
Anonymousover 11 years agoTHIS FOR PURCHASE...
seriously... got a website? I may not have much and probably couldn't afford it without some saving, but this is some book worthy shit... and trust me, waiting for the next chapter is pure HELL
I read every chapter up to 10 and then checked twice daily for the next one..
Got a web blog or somewhere else where you post it? The wait is killer and I feel like a drug addict reading it...
ME WANT MOAR NAO!!!!! Sooooo gooooood...
dliterover 11 years agoFantastic chapter as usual! Keep them coming as fast as your imagination works, or if it works too fast, then as fast as you can put it on paper:-) I love all the characters and really can't wait for the next part. This is the type of main character that I can feel in my psyche!
