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Click hereThe muscles inside her squeezing and squeezing me.
And when I couldn't do anything else, I pulled out of her into the unforgiving air and sprayed across her stomach and her breasts (one small, almost comical pearl flowing down into her navel). And then fell down on her, onto her breasts, into her arms, her mouth, her kiss her eyes, her eyes, her murmuring voice, our eyes.
"Are you alright?"
we asked nearly simultaneously.
And yes, in tears, my girl beneath the stairs,
in tears that were not sadness, her lips against my neck, my ear, trembling with the fact of what we had just done, both of speaking, blind with love into the ear of the other:
"Oh god, Jimmy, oh god, Maura, oh yes. Oh yes, I'm fine. Oh God. Oh yes."
Many of your commenter were very effusively positive about your style. I for one found it somewhat difficult to read. It just didn't flow for me. I'm sure it was just me.???
A good story though and gave it 5*s.
I love the descriptions you give, picture perfect. I can see her, them, in my mind. Thank you. And your story is so hot, not just the fucking... the whole nudity tease, makes me wish i was there. Bare feet mentioned always adds to my pleasure, and the description of his licking rough heel to virgin arch... what a magnificent mind painting. You are a great story smith.
A piece of art. Never seen anything like it on this site. Thank you for writing it.
It was very different from the norm ...
Many words i had to look up as others would have to if they were honest about it !!
I did find it a bit long winded, thats just me though !
I was tired when i read this and sadly that added to the deformation and willingless to enrapture its unusual dialogue.
Thanks for your story ....