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Click hereThe guilt that he had been suppressing through all of his arousal was now coming in like a freight train now that the barrier of his arousal was gone. It was his sister, the girl who he had spent his whole life with. Seth felt dirty.
As the minutes continued to tick off the clock, Seth began to try and justify his actions to himself. He hadn't actually seen anything; it was more of the thought of her masturbating that had captivated his mind. He didn't see any part of her body that he wouldn't have seen in a bikini. If she hadn't wanted other people to see it than she shouldn't have shot the video in the first place.
They were all lame excuses, Seth knew that. Deep down he knew that he was the one at fault for watching the video, but he just couldn't grasp whether or not being attracted to his sister was wrong. He knew invading her privacy was wrong, but the harder thing for him to grasp was the attraction.
Finally, he made a decision: in the morning he would get up and wipe the phone clean so he wouldn't have to worry about it anymore.
If only it would be that easy...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoI really like this. It's way more "normal" than the other stories out there that just get straight to sex. This has some reality to it. I'm really interested to see where you take this next. Gave 5*
Anonymousover 7 years agoYes, a good start but now you need to pick up the pace and get to more details and of course what Seth will do when he sees Amber and where it goes.
You need to add more physical details on Seth and Amber and hopefully, they will have matching high sexual energy just as they do academically. Maybe, some deeply hidden naughty feelings but a stronger want on checking them out between sister and brother ?? Thanks.
Shivvover 7 years agoI liked the pace, but I just wish there were more. I see that you've been successful with other series publishing one small part every few days or so, so it's understandable why you would stick to it. And maybe I will enjoy it if I wait until all the parts are published. But right now it's basically a story fragment that's not even really worth rating.
RockyStoneover 7 years agoHere is the sentence that set my thoughts about English: "His warm cum sat "smothered" along his hand and the towel as his cock began to soften." I'm sorry if you took offense; I generally try not to insult folks. I noted all the "H" boxes affixed to your stories; I gather that many folks like your stories.
RS
tnhardonover 7 years agoAuthorEnglish is definitely my first and only language, unless you count the little bit I retained from high school Spanish class. I'm not entirely sure what issues you have with my scentence structure, as I have used a similar writing style in my other 30+ works. The only thing you expressly stated was that men "do not get wet", which I have to disagree with. Whether or not you refer to precum as "getting wet" or not doesn't change the fact that it happens.
I understand for some that my story might move a little slower than you'd generally prefer, but that is just the story pacing I generally use. If you are looking for a quick hitting story, this chapter isn't for you. However, I think there are many who can appreciate the slower pacing.
The excitement that Seth feels from watching the video is more based on seeing his sister exposing her sexuality, not necessarily just because of the content in the video. The taboo nature of incest can be very arousing for someone who hasn't explored it before. As the story continues you will get to see Seth further explore the more exciting side of Amber's exploits.
I appreciate everyone's feedback, both positive and negative, and hope you enjoy the rest this story has to offer.
RockyStoneover 7 years agoMen don't get wet in the first place. It doesn't seem to me that English isn't the first language your learned. If English is your first language, then I'm confused by your sentence structure. More should have been available as details, or build up instead of being attracted after seeing a video of very vague self-stimulation. Keep at it.
RS
