The Keeper Ch. 06-07

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Gus' face turned white.

"She was my first friend," Quinn gazed out the kitchen window. After a long pause, he said woodenly. "She had red hair and blue eyes and a million freckles."

"Where does she live now?"

Quinn didn't answer. He stood looking out the window, his gaze remote and empty, his hands in the dishwater t clenching and unclenching each in turn.

"Well, come on little one," Gus' voice broke the silence. "Why don't you and I go and get your hands washed up. And I'll take you to a lady friend of mine and get you some clothes. I think Uncle Quinn needs some alone time.

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BigotedeFocaBigotedeFoca6 months ago

Superb writing, wonderful imagination, I’m loving it.🤩🤩🤩

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good but confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is so Fing good! Please write more of this world!

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 2 years ago

"I dreamed about her. She said everything was gonna be alright. She has a stuffed Tigger, just like mine." Aww! Save the babies!

MfalmeMfalmeover 2 years ago

Please keep this story going. I'm well invested now.

monmonmon7monmonmon7over 2 years ago

Loving it! Please do not drop this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So far I absolutely love the plot. This is very well written grammatically so I won't bore you being a grammar Nazi. It has been a while since I have looked forward to a read quite this much. Thank you and I look forward to your next submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please write more about this story it's really good

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