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Click here"I think Michelle has already staked her claim," Lillian opined, to the sounds of "no fair" in unison from the girls.
Victor was still reeling from all of this and he relaxed a little. He still had two full days to go and hoped he would survive the weekend's experiences. There were so many other families in attendance -- would they all want to mingle and "interact" as the Franklin family obviously wanted to? He would likely be fried by the time he got home Monday night, but he was damned well going to try his very best!
"Are you going to be ready for me tonight, daddy?" Rachel queried, emerald eyes lively with anticipation.
Oh yeah, hisvery best, he nodded ...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoIgnore the sex
he was being decieved by people he trusted all the way from childhood (hus mother, first wife, second wife, children!)
He summed it up nicely when he cried "I don't know anything."
End of story. "What you don't know can't hurt you." Tell that to the victims who did not know that the car coming the other way, had a drunk driver.
Rapier875over 4 years agoBut why the hell did you not write more ?
So very disapointing.
Rapier
Anonymousover 7 years agoBrett you say that the characters are clear. Six thinly described women in effectively a one page story. They may be clear to you ( that's the problem). They are not clear for us.
Anonymousover 7 years agoTo the person who said that step-siblings is not incest: depends on who you ask. My family and I would definitely say 'Yes'. The Law does too, in most places. But that's kind of irrelevant in this story, as there are plenty of blood relations - relating with other relations. As to the person who accused Lillian of cheating: Not if it is blood. Mi Familia. Family above all else. This is a great story, and just too bad more people haven't commented on it and really shameful to those who were not 100% supportive. SHAME - SHAME! Love your stuff, most of it.
BrettJover 8 years agoAuthorThere seems to be a bit of confusion on the part of some readers. There are times where it's Barry (the son) having sex. Other times it is Victor (the father). There are two male characters in this tale, there should be no confusing them if you read carefully, yet I've had a number of letters saying I didn't keep the characters straight. If you read carefully - yes, I did.
I may return to these characters again, hopefully you will all be able to enjoy a sequel. And it erotica, cheating isn't as big a deal. This isn't the real world and Victor sure ended up with more than he bargained for.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYour utopian society in which everyone shares everything was tried early last century and didn't work out too well...in Russia (it's called Communism). In all fairness to the Bolshevik's, though, their experiment got hijacked by Joe Stalin, who turned it into a Totalitarian dictatorship instead of a true Communist state, but then, Communism works for ants and bees, but it won't work for humans - - we run on compliments and cold, hard cash!
As for the horrors of incest...the only way it causes actual damage is if care is not taken to prevent unwanted offspring; after all, look at the damage it did to "royalty" in Europe and elsewhere in the world where inbreeding (to keep the royal bloodline "pure", doncha know...) led to hemophilia and worse.
LancerInLAalmost 9 years agoHad to stop in the middle before getting upset.
Fine, he accepted that the kids played with each other, but he was being cheated on by his wife. He was cuckholded by his son for a long time it seems.
These actions drive me nuts.
Not going to vote, but those reasons lead me to think being cuckholded is fine by the author.
