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Click here"I just want you to be okay baby girl. I'll see you later, yeah?"
The women went their separate ways. Andrea dragged herself home, collecting Sophia from school on her way. Dinner was a simple affair, pasta with a dollop of pesto from a jar. It was a lazy dinner and woefully lacking in nutritional value, but she couldn't face cooking anything more adventurous. Sophia was so excited about the goal she scored at football club that afternoon she didn't notice her Mums unusually despondent mood.
Andrea found it hard to sleep that night. She kept replaying the days events over and over in her head, trying to work out what had happened. Why he'd done it, why she'd let him do it and why he'd sent her away so unexpectedly? Finally, she fell into a restless fitful sleep.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoI love how this story is leading. Hope to ser a good ending
North200over 8 years agoAn excellent first chapter - establishes the characters and leaves us with questions to be answered in future chapters!
carvohiabout 9 years agoHow I got here I don't know. I write mostly junk in the Loving Wives genre, but somehow found my way here.
This opening chapter was really good. I enjoyed it. Gave it a five.
Thanks. Think I'll read some more
always_yesover 9 years agoI was so invested in this story when I found it that I didn't stop to comment, but it's so subtly sexy and hot. I love the mystery of it, the surprise in his actions, and her reactions. Just fantastic and so well written!
AmandaSarahover 9 years agoI'm surprised the rating for this story isn't much higher! Your writing is wonderful and this is such a sexy story - looking forward to reading more chapters :)
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis first chapter has drawn me in. Oddly enough, I find myself drawn to the little details in the story...the slight accent to his voice...the little bit of grey in his hair...the knife! lol who the hell goes around with a knife in his suit indeed! Engaging start! I enjoy the natural flow of your writing. keep it up!
karalinealmost 10 years agoAuthorthanks again for all the kind words everyone, yet again they do wonders. The second chapter should be along shortly, it's with my editor. Not so sure about the chapters following that, they need quite a bit more work I think.
joodlealmost 10 years agoThis was a very addicting piece. Even though there were a few errors here and there, it was easy to understand. I have noticed in my time on Lit that the more interesting the plot, the easier it is to ignore typos. So kudos on that. We all need more. I am disappointed he did not ask her to come back the next day or something. Or get her number, or SOMETHING. They have to be reunited so he can finish what he started, and hopefully come to an arrangement. The daughter complicates things when it comes to her being able to see him regularly, but the daughter also allows for another plot twist. Perhaps she was conceived through a rape? But the non-con nature of the encounter with this guy seemed fairly new to her, and she didn't seriously fight him, or anticipate what he would do---whereas a rape victim would likely be a little more on their guard. I am interested to see where you take this. He has to have her, but he needs to find her first. Please continue!!!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoloved it. seems he realized how he lost control. Loved when he said "Go" with such angst. can't wait to read more.
