All Comments on 'The Missing Dragon'

Has anyone seen part 2 yet? I know that it usually takes lit 3days to okay a post, but it has already been 4. So anxious to read the next part.

It's taking a while! I think it might be because it's a very long chapter (10 pages) and they might have a bit of a backlog or something. It's still pending though, so no rejections or anything like that. I've been sat here for the past four days now and my refresh button is getting very well used! I need another hobby. :oD

Fingers crossed that it'll be up soon!

Lol, crap it's taking too long. I don't suppose you would be willing to just email the file to me so that I can stop this horrendous waiting lol.

Same boat. Ever since I saw the announcement of the submission on the first I've been anticipatory and I've been checking every couple hours the last two days.

Which says something about the quality of the first chapter and your ability to grab a reader Lien.

if u think your refresh button is getting well used, mines almost broken

I loved this, and am now rushing to read chapter 2!

Best story I have read on this site! Truly fantastic! Loved the description!

i hope you go on and add more to the story. andi hope to find him fucking a dragon.

This is a great story that I genuinely enjoy reading as a fantasy fan!

Read both chapters. I love much of your work, and this seires is no exception. Ireally do wish you would write faster though. :D

Hope they get to stay there, and that Freddie doesn't do something stupid if he gets released...

Somehow I found and read chapter two first, but this is written well, has a good story, and really draws you in. So I had to go back and read this. PLEASE write more of this, haha.

The sexual attraction you end up feeling for an Orc is incredible the storyline ends up building to the point where you feel like you are reading a standard novel that just has tantalizing featurettes in the overall story. I find this story sexually charged without losing any of its important overtones. Please read this story and give feed back to encourage Lien Geller to continue his publications on this site. The authors on this site submit their stories without any pay aside from feedback. So please give postive feedback or positive criticism. Either way, let them know their stories are being read and appreciated for their contribution.

One of my absolute favorites. Very nicely written.

And the story doesn't get in the way of the sex. Sorry to say that if there is too much "literature", I start skimming. Personally, I found it to be a very good balance.

Loved it

I can honestly say I have never thought of orcs as being hot. Well... that changed. Extremely well written, and oh, what I would give to be in his shoes...

Let's see... being chased by a knife-wielding maniac, then waking up in another world, beating a crazy, and crazy-hot, female orc who then decides she WILL have sex with me, followed by... well, you know the rest. I say that the knife maniac thing is a small price to pay for the utter heaven which follows.

THIS STORY IS AMAZING. THE PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION OF ALGRA & JANETTE IS TRULY HOT. NEVER THOUGHT ORCS COULD BE SO DAMN HOT ESPECIALLY AFTER WATCHING "THE LORD OF THE RINGS".. CURRENTLY READING THE SECOND PART OF THIS STORY..

U TRULY ROCK!!!!!!

I've been reading Literotica for about 10 years it would seem, and so far this is the only story I have ever felt the Plot of was perfect. The just isn't erotic Fiction... it's a work of art and thank you very much for posting it.

Fucking great can't get enough

toooo damn good

*whistle* Wow, this guys landed in luck city. Big dick, muscular, can fight, gets a hot ass orc and human, and gets to fuck them whenever the hell he wants to? Jesus Christ it seems like he really got his dues made up for the past 18 years. Hope that cockmuncher Freddie gets killed and soon too before he does something retarded. Really enjoy this story good work.

Great story. I must as a question why Greg never protected himself from Freddie and his goons? He certainly posses skills to do so even is his tormentor had a knife. I must say that your orcs certainly has interesting view on slavery. Their slaves are more simillar to servants rather than actual slaves.

Greg learned martial arts to keep Freddie away and experienced some success with that but he didn't want to just go beating the crap out of the guy. He wanted to be left alone. So he could have taken Freddie but not Freddie with a knife and several other guys. I mean, just ask any self defense trainer what to do in that situation and the first answer is always gonna be run the hell away. So that's what he did! :o)

I have read both chapters and I love them. The tiger woman was pretty cool I think it's really awesome that you have all these creatures he gets to have sex with. Also your story has lots and lots of details and thats one of the greatest things I love in a story. Keep going with the story I have told 81 of my friends about it and they love it as much as me. The girls love the details of Gregory's body and how he made janette so satisfied. We want more please write chapter 3 and more after that we really love this story.

why no anal I want orc anal

I seriously think you should consider making a book out of this dude like call it the dragons chosen maybe or something similar.

XIII

beautiful

This was absolutely..... ummmm .... how you say it..... uh...... oh! AMAZING!

A good well thought interesting tail (excuse the pun)

pretty please with a cherry on top ;-)

This has been an amazing adventure. Better than Eragon by miles, not to mention the vivid and enthralling sex scenes. I have to say this story is tied for the most well thought out story line, plot and adventure. Only rivalled by some of the 500 page novels you pay for. Everything flowed very nicely and was a pleasure to read. Literally.

Keep up the good work, and keep writing :D

Wolf_Soldier

read the title

Lien you should definitely continue this story I have read both chapters multiple times and can't get enough of them. I hope you get a third chapter posted soon. I know there a lots of other people who have read this series and want to see you post more.

I so enjoy your writing. Thanks and keep going!!

I have a new appreciation for Orc girls! :D

Amazingly, I really don't mind the lack of dragons. LOL

I like your balance of sex and story. I like your writing style. I like the way the conversation and narrative flow. That alone makes me consider your writing one of the best on this site.

I also love the fact that the antagonist is stuck working the sewage system. Perfect place for him. That's the perfect fantasy - people getting their just desserts.

So, is our protagonist going to also make a name for himself as an artist? I can't wait to continue reading and finding out more.

Thank you

"Best story among those thousands of stories I had read...

I DON'T HAVE WORDS 4 THE COMPLIMENT..."

I never thought of female orcs as being hot before I read this.

key word: before

That is all.

I just copied this into OpenOffice writer to find out how many pages it is in equivalent.

50.

FIFTY FUCKING PAGES.

I nearly had a heart attack. I don't know how authors write stuff this long without going nuts.

God, I barely have 14 pages for my work, and at least 2 pages of that is just ideas.

O.O

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I love that there's a really solid story underpinning all the sex (which is brilliantly written)

If this was in print, I'd definitely buy it. More, please!

Were it a book, I'd buy it.

A couple of things, Firstly you know you're a damned good author when you can make something I didn't think was hot , female orcs, damn sexy as hell.

And I just realized there are two more chapters to this and now I'm so happy,

Please more

should be a book!

A pleasure in every sense!

I LOVE Orcs! They don't get nearly the treatment they deserve in fantasy stories, erotica or not. 5 stars for this one, already got chapter 2 opened up for reading.

An amazing imaginative and erotic story.

Ok, I always vote, but I rarely leave a comment, this work was far too enjoyable to let go with only a 5 star rating. I actually enjoyed the buildup, as it made the victory in the end that much sweeter, more than doubly so ;-)

Lien you have done a wonderful job, the story was enjoyable on a purely literary level, then you add in steamy sex and it goes over the top, thank you.

yep that was one of the best ive read in a while.. well done, kept me going the whole time..

Loved this story. Can't wait to read the rest.

You have a good story line and nice back-story on the characters. I can even picture the places described. I would love to see this as a live action, or even animated, movie.

THIS IS A 6 AT LEAST OUT OF 5 STARS

It's not enough, I loved it. Please write more chapters, please!

God this made me hard for hours please write more

This is great! I can't wait to read more of your writing.

Please write some more about Gregory's adventures on this world! You may also want to hook up with someone who can lay this out on a storyboard. Also an illustrator so that it could be made into a multi-part publication like Elf Quest.

I enjoyed everything about this story. Great fantasy, great writing, and really hot sexy-sex!

Good start, nice setup, and then the discovery of the 'new' delivered with panache, violence and hot sex! Awesome combo :) At the moment there are only three chapters :( this needs fixing... please?

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im amazed at your imagination. Everything built along linesthat made sense and built to a very good ending. Looking forward to more

Was going to find a nice tall bridge to jump off of if there weren't any more sequels. Seriously though, nice job you haven't gotten enough credit for this, originally I was worried about the Orc chuck, but you made it work. Don't stop writing even if it's another series, thank you for your time.

Awesomest story ever

and I am only on Ch. 01

So far, he is lost in a parallel universe, with a green Orc slave, and one concubine, and a ring with uncertain powers in his pocket.

can't wait to see where you are taking us.

Could not stop reading. This seriously to be turned into a series of books. You have the setting, main characters are set and more characters can be added. Or at least more people need to hear about your work. I don't know if anyone still uses this site or not, but please just keep up the good work if you still do use this site.

Doesn't anyone else from 2014 know about this!!!!???? This story is everything i needed in an erotic literature. Please tell me Lien Geller still makes stories, I will be heartbroken if she doesn't. And while walking though the comments it seems not even people from the current year (2014) even know about this.

Pure genius. Fantastic story!!

Thanks for posting!

Absolutely amazing story. I loved it and gave it one of my rare 5s. Keep it up lien_geller!

This is my second time reading this story. Can't wait to read more.

the 2nd time through.

Hey look this bout my sixth time reading the missing dragon story and still love it never get bored of it. Looking forward to ch4 and hope its just as great :)

Definitely looking forward to chapter 4.

I love all you stories but this series is my first and favourite of them all, please continue this because I am not sure how long I can take this delay

I don't know how l took so long to find this author, but as far as I'm concerned, better late than never. Along with a couple choice peices in the Romance and Incest/Taboo catagories, you, Mr. Geller, are among the best active writers on this website. Haven't gotten around to your most lengthy (hurr, hurr) entry yet, but so far, none of your stories warrant less than 5 stars. I sincerely hope you'd consider a sequel to this particular tale. A perfect blend of engaging plotline, animated characters, and, of course, sex of the steamiest variety. Keep writing, you magnificent bastard.

I am completely in agreement with what anon said, I am amazed I didn't find this author sooner, but am glad I finally managed to. Great stuff man, can't wait to read your other works.

I hadlve seen this story millions of times but always passed it up and instead read something else like Unleashed just because of the title. I just decided I just couldn't find any more stories so I told myself I would try this one out. I'm glad I did.5⭐'s.

Darkness Lord

Absolutely fantastic. You shift and slide us straight into your world, and what a world it is!

A good tale, well-told, although I'd liked to have heard about the Dragon.

Maybe in the nex story. . .

73

HP

good god! great writing! on to the next chapter!

I hope you write more to this story ,like does he go back? what about Freddy???Does he marry the Ork??? do they discover the majick of the ring? do they have children?? come on write more !!!!

Stephen J

This is fucking EPIC!

You MUST keep writing more like this! Ok, enough flattery, I'm off the read pt. 2 and 3.

Holy hell, that was hot!!!!!!!!!! I mean that every ounce of nerdy fangrrl excitement I can muster ... Definitely off to read the other chapters ...

This is one of the hottest things I've read, please do more

First time reader of your work - glad to have found you! Thank you for taking the time to ensure your stories are not only fun and full of detailed and well-drawn characters, but also grammatical and not overtly error-filled, which is often the downfall of other potentially enjoyable stories on this site.... You've joined my favourite authors list and I look forward to reading your tales in years to come (",)

it's a physical and mental delightful writing waiting to take the reader on a release of pent up emotion and sperm..thanks for the effort and write more ... please

This was an amazing story in more ways than 1!

That was the most greatest feeling I have ever gotten. I wholeheartedly enjoyed that

I could read an entire novel of this. EPIC!

Never really explored sci-fi much till I stumbled on this ...the 280+ comments this got, plus the high 4.8 scores, caught my attention.

This was riveting, as well as smoking hot...VERY likable characters , great dialogue ...always such a treat when superb story has follow-up chapters.

Enjoyable and well built story that set a base for the world, let all us readers get off, and was just balanced to perfection so nothing felt out of place or forced. Even had some nice little tricks to make you think something else would happen! Don't give up you gift ever please please please!

-SnowRevol

Have read your writings All many times over. Probably 4th reread of series. I know much in works. Can Wait if it is in true caliber , your mark.

I loved this story every word had me warped up I really hope you Continue this story line till the finish. Very good stuff :-)

I don't know why but on the last page where it says "imminent shagging" it make me laugh to high heaven hahahaaha keep up the good work.

Never thought sex with female orc could be sexy... you proved me wrong! wow!

I love the story and the plot its agreat read there could be less sex and more belivable'that much sex gets borring he's a vir. Keep him human an don't a demagod. your a good author Ican't wait to read the rest'keep it up

When I read the closing comment of "then may I humbly suggest checking out my other stories" I have to admit I had a sad. I wanted more chapters. Then I looked to the right and cheered to see there were moar.

Great so far and I can't wait to read the rest.

You MUST continue this story!!!

I also think it'd be great if you wrote one about a similar virgin hero who unwillingly is thrust into the ownership of his own personal strip club & due to financial issues or whatever plot device is required to fill it with gorgeous sex slaves he aquires throughout his travels, it could even be a wandering strip club(like a wandering circus) staffed with beautiful elves, fairies, succubi & humans he encounters, captures or enslaves.

And an orc as his female bodygaurd.

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You could implement all that in this story itself!!!! Please Do!!!

I've read a lot, and I mean a lot of stories but honestly none of them are better than this. The storyline is marvellous. You're Amazing, the story is amazing. I won't even ask for more chapters (although I'd be grateful if you did) because this is a masterpiece and you've worked hard enough on this . Tnx

I really enjoyed this story, and look forward to reading more. Thank you!

what a great story, cant wait to read the other chapters.