The Only Constant is Change Ch. 07

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

A funny thing happened the next morning when they went to breakfast. Without even thinking about it, Jeremy took Serena to the same diner where he'd taken Ava the previous morning. When the waitress, a brunette who appeared to be in her mid-20's, came to take their orders, it was the same one who'd waited on him before. She must have recognized him, because she looked from Jeremy to Serena and back again, a funny, almost confused look on her face, which he noted without comment. "What can I get you this morning?"

Jeremy was pretty hungry and ordered a big breakfast with eggs, breakfast potatoes, ham and sourdough toast, and a short stack of pancakes; he added a side of bacon and ordered coffee and orange juice. Serena watched him with an amused look on her face, and then placed an order for granola and yogurt, with a glass of apple juice.

When the waitress left, Serena looked around to make sure no one was listening and said quietly, "Sir? You must be so hungry from using up so much energy on me last night. I'm, uh, 'feeling it' this morning, if you know what I mean."

Jeremy's eyes showed contrition, and he answered in a quiet voice. "I'm sorry I hurt you. I thought I did what you wanted me to do. I..."

She stopped him with a touch of her hand. "Jeremy, don't you dare apologize for anything. You did exactly what I wanted you to do, and now I know what the price is." She ducked her head to capture his eyes. "And if you told me we were going back to my mom's house and doing it again right now, I would get my purse and leave without a question. It was better than I ever imagined, including how I feel right now." She paused, thinking about her next words. "It's like, the soreness is a reminder that you did this to me, like you marked me as yours somehow. Jeremy, I don't know if I love you or anything, but I can't imagine feeling any closer to you than I do right now."

He was surprised at the intensity of her words. They were comforting, and he was able to relax.

A short while later, she excused herself to go to the restroom. Just after she left, the waitress returned with their orders. As she placed the plates and drinks, Jeremy said, "Can I ask you a question?"

"Go ahead," she replied.

"When you took our orders earlier, you had an expression on your face, like you were confused. What was that all about?"

The waitress blushed and said, "I'm sorry about that. It's none of my business."

"What are you talking about?" he asked.

With a quick glace around, she whispered, "I thought I recognized you from yesterday morning, but you were here with a different girl. I didn't want to embarrass you."

Jeremy chuckled to himself. Naturally it would seem odd to others who saw him in the company of different girls; it still seemed a little odd to himself. With a glance at her name tag, he said, "Helen, don't worry about that. It's an unusual situation. The girl I'm with today, Serena, she and I have an...interesting...relationship. It's the same kind of thing I have with Ava, who I was here with yesterday. They're very good friends with each other, and they're both my girlfriends." When he finished, he watched her, curious to see her reaction.

The look of surprise on her face was priceless. She started to say something a couple of times, only to stop herself. Finally, she said, "That's kinda hot. I don't know if I could do it, but you must be something else if those two are willing to share you." Then she winked and walked away; Jeremy thought there might be just a touch more sway in her hips as she went.

He just shook his head as he turned to his food. The very first time he'd spoken with Ava, in the brush pile that day, she'd told him he had an effect on women. He'd dismissed it at the time, but the events over the past couple of months had lent credence to the theory. Given Helen's response, maybe he'd have to put a little more stock into it.

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
5 Comments
Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uover 4 years ago
Good story.

A real life thing though. By splitting himself between two or more girls he will never get to know either of them fully and never get to see what a relationship wither is like. So this then leads to mistakes in girl choices. Real life allows for 100% total immersion into a relationship with a chick and you can marry her or move on.

Oh the story is so bogged down that at this rate we won’t even see the first day of the navy intake. Also 26 year army veteran dad and you give no explanation why he is going navy? Strange that families generally in my experience stay within the same service.

valkoinenvalkoinenabout 5 years ago
I agree

Harddaysnight has got it right. This is a great story, well written. Too much sex can spoil the flow, which happens often on this site.

It's also good to see characters grow by getting to know themselves as well as others. Makes them just like us when we were that age.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thanks..

Nice feedback from HDK followed by an awsome and humble response from the author. I too am thoroughly enjoying your story. Your update is a good start to the holiday weekend. It would be a fantastic holiday with an update from HDK to his own epic :)

Minstrel_BlueMinstrel_Blueover 5 years agoAuthor
You're Right, As Usual

I've been feeling the same thing, HDK. I got a little over my skis with the number of characters I introduced early, and waiting so long to introduce sex, I think I've lost focus on where I was going. In the long run, I think Jeremy's character needs some success before I knock him down too badly. He has a couple of tough decisions coming up. I feel like a broken record, but I envision the chapters changing quite a bit shortly.

Thanks for staying with me.

- MB

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 5 years ago
You have a nice story going here.

It may sound odd, but I think you need a little less sex and a lot more action. The sex scenes are nice, but really do not advance the plot. I know it is a porn site, but many of us readers look for plot, action and conflict. This chapter covered two nights and everything is at it was, except he's been laid... twice. That's a great thing for him, but nothing much happened otherwise. I am enjoying this story and will be looking for the next chapter. Thanks so much for the hard work and time this requires.

Share this Story

story TAGS

Similar Stories

Charity Begins Next Door Life isn't fair. So when you fight back, fight dirty.in Romance
Irish Eyes His love was betrayed, what next.in Romance
A Shepherd Afield Pt. 01 Ben struggles with his new notoriety.in Erotic Couplings
A Shepherd in France Ch. 01 Ben and friends visit Paris.in Erotic Couplings
The Shepherd of Ashburn Court Pt. 01 The tale of Ben Shepherd begins.in Erotic Couplings
More Stories