All Comments on 'The Pits'

I've read all of his stories at least twice. Mostly with considerable enjoyment.

This time I did some research. I'd not heard of Sarah Jay so I looked her up.

I lost a lot of my respect for SS06. She's UGLY. And those ridiculous fake tits are appalling.

My wife is considerably better looking, and she'll be 81 on her next birthday.

Egg on the face.

I like StangStar06's writing and have read most of his stories. But in this one he really laid an egg. An ostrich is a bird that lays the largest egg on the planet. Gestation refers to a mammal that carries and gives birth to a live fetus. So how can an ostrich have a shorter gestation period than a cow. Oops

The funniest murder-for-hire story I have ever read

5 Stars I Loved this funny murder mystery

I really enjoyed the story. Very entertaining. Well written and easy to read. Thanks

This was a great story, and after reading another Stangstar masterpiece. I really wanna get a mustang except for the electric one, that one just seems off kilter to me

Another very good read! Well done! So enjoyable. And, it also makes me want to buy a Mustang. lol Thank-you for this

Classic SS06. Loved it.

Awesome story. 5 stars.

I knew from the 3rd page Jenna's sexual preference. 5 star great story

The title says it all.

Seriously this was just fucking stupid and his whole falling in love at the drop of a hat is fucking annoying as hell.

I had read this story previously, but came back to it because of a rather snarky comment. Reading it again made me realize how funny it is. Alana delivered some great lines:

“You’re much more attractive when you’re dead”. And, while making love, “So, do something.”

I rated it a five the first time and I’d rate it higher this time if I could.

other then the rant about mustangs being great, story was amazing.

As usual, another awsome story. Thank you for your efforts sir.

A bit weird, but fun. He should have run away from the artificial whore on 1st sight, a woman that high maintenance is no one's S.O. but her own.

Entertaining as always. Hard to believe Tony didn’t know who Jerry’s ex was though…

This is the kind of plot shenanigans and humor I've come to expect from your better stories. Honestly, you're so much better writing like this than over the top drama or burn the bitch stories with a-hole main characters. Tony's real likable and funny, has that proactive mindset but isn't an ass. He'd definitely be a good buddy. Overall I really liked this story, even if there was no mystery or suspense in it, it was still fun to read everything unfold. The only thing that puts me off is your crusade against fake boobs. I get it - to each their own, but I'm probably on the other side of the spectrum - my wife has gigantic 32M fake hooters and I love 'em.

Alana was a very likable character.

the entrapment plot was a bit over the top but I did enjoy the story.