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Click hereJohn and Margaret moved to Florida. They had enough money squirreled away so that they would not live in poverty, but their previous lifestyle was gone forever. Brad never heard from them again.
Eventually Jeanette stopped working at Alternative Nozzle to raise not only Kyle and Gloria but her twin girls with Bradley, Eva and Eleanor.
Perhaps the most remarkable changes were to Alicia and Boynton. Brad, and everyone else except for Alicia's mother, had underestimated the adverse effect Justin's blatant cheating and subsequent divorce had had on Alicia and Boynton. After Branson Mfg. filed for bankruptcy Boynton bought its assets, liquidated them, and then had the property leveled and built a community center for underprivileged kids on the site. Alicia returned to her vivacious (she was always beautiful) self and married a widowed doctor with two kids and was as happy as a pig in poop.
When Kyle was seven, Gloria four, and Eva and Eleanor two, as Brad and Jeanette played with them in their backyard playground as everyone was laughing and running around, a tear came to Brad's eye. Revenge had been sweet -- life with a woman he loved and who loved him back unequivocally, and a family where he swore everyone would be treated equally, was even sweeter.
It reads like a procession of events, at no point do you have empathising or rooting for any character, they don’t even seem real. 3⭐️ very average.
This reads like a technical manual. Zero emotion and unnecessary details and filler that slows down and clogs up the story.
Interesting take on a story about a cheating slut at least he wasn't cuck bitch all in all though it wasn't that bad
I really wanted to like this story, but there's zero emotion in it despite events that would have been extremely traumatic to anyone. The author makes the mistake of just flatly telling us everything that happens to Brad and the people in the story without really ever telling us how Brad thinks or feels. It's very much just: "X happen to Brad, then Brad did Y, and the Z happened", The End. I mean, Brad has child with Virginia and I don't think there is one interaction between them. Brad doesn't fight for custody nor does he even question if the child is his, which any rational person would immediately do. This has the potential to be powerfully emotional, but as it is, it's just the skeleton of a story.
Second time for me on this story and still good. Considering the proclivities of his ex wife and Justine he never got a DNA test on Kyle. I guess he assumed or was sure by timing that Kyle was his biological son. We must also give them credit for adopting the child left after his ex's suicide. There is a certain justice or Karma in destroying people who have no respect or empathy for others.
A really great story, although one commenter mentioned there was not much emotion in to the story. It was surely a story written in the third person or an observer. I t was well done and fairly detailed. Lets face it the story would have been even better if it had been written in the first person. It was written well. 5 stars.
A good storyline. Bit i don't get much emotion from it. Cloud have had less detail about the financials and more look inside people's thoughtd. But overall a decent story. Agree that the suicide did nothing fit the story. Maybe with some insight into her struggle afterwards it would not have felt out of place.