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Just as her orgasm began to subside, her body jerking and convulsing involuntarily, Nate's own climax welled up. She felt it and took control, riding him harder than ever, with what must've been the last of her strength, and he came. And came. She hugged him with all her might and took it all.
For the first time in either of their lives, they'd found someone that gave more than they took, and they'd be damned if they took that for granted. They'd be damned if they let it slip away again.
- COMMENTS
mrdata9770over 2 years agoThis was a nice short story. I liked it. But was Paula doing her hairdresser behind his back? I would have liked to know.
Anonymousover 7 years agowhat a boring piece - who are these who favored it, part of the author's extended family?
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThis is one of the best stories I have read in a while. Please keep it up.
It is very seldom that we get a second chance in life. I would love to see where you take this.
GrandPaMalmost 8 years agoDO NOT retract this story or change ANYTHING about it!
Just CONTINUE THE STORY!
This stands as one of the few really good stories about really good, really human characters that normal folks can truly care about and want to hear more from.
As for editing mistakes, really? There were editing mistakes? must've missed them.
They were so insignificant that they passed by me without notice - and I tend to notice things like that most times.
Just move forward, and tell us more about these two.
That is the best compliment I can give a writer. OH, and 5*s.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoPlease continue with this story and these characters. I am really intrigued by both main characters and their backstories. What led them to this point? How did he end up with someone like Paula? Why the hell did he stay? What other contemptible things did Paula do to him and Amelia? What was Nate and Amelia's relationship like previously? What was Nate's mother like and how did that inform his relationships with Amelia and Paula? What exactly was it that Paula warned Amelia not to tell Nate? Now that Nate and Amelia are together, how will it affect the two sisters? Are Nate and Amelia together? Will Paula try to get him back? Would it work if she did? Was there ever any real love between the two of them, on either side? See... there are so many unanswered questions so please, indulge us and CONTINUE THIS STORY (Those were pleading caps, not shouty caps). Thank you!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoVery enjoyable to read. Interested to see where your characters lead us.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoA lot of stories seem to be quick one offs, but every now and again you find a gem. This is one of those gems, and I feel I can relate to the main characters. Well written and amazing. It could be a movie!!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI must agree. You would probably be amazed at the number of people out there that can relate directly to this story. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoCompared to most stories on this site, this is incredibly well written. It might have been a bit long to develop, but it allowed the reader to get to know your characters. Really, a good job! Enjoyed it much.
