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Click hereI handed her to Ada and she started crying too. I was afraid to but I had to ask. "Ada, this might not be the time to ask but youaregoing to keep her, aren't you?"
Turning red and whispering furiously, "How dare you even ask that? This ismybaby."
Grinning at her intensity, I replied, "You will let me love her a little, won't you?" I walked out to call her mom and Pearl. I knew my life had changed in an unexpected way and changed forever.
End of Part One. Part Two to follow in a couple of days.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoOne star…for sighting Andrea Dworkin, a whack job who believes sex between married couples is rape,
Tavadelphinover 10 years agoI like the way it went -
For ir to go further is fine but it works as it ends here -
Them being a family can work - for him to marry her will be a stretch - 20 vs 60??
Anonymousabout 18 years agoI think your other readers said it all, but I have to add my two cents worth. On what was a relatively difficult subject, young pregnant women moving in with older couple, you did a wonderfully sensative heartwarming job of developing a beautiful story, or at least part one of what I hope will be a beautiful story. Congratulations. 60 year old George
Blue88about 18 years agoHeartfelt, sensitive, literate and beautifully written. Chapter 2 of this series, which I will read, feels like a small, lovely gift waiting for me. My appreciation to the author.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoI liked what you have done and it grabbed my emotions from the beginning.
don87654about 18 years agoPlease don't keep us waiting very long for the next part of this very well written story.
PEATBOGabout 18 years agoA great tale with fine characterizing. Your writing is a cut above the usual standard dished out at LITEROTICA and I’m looking forward to Ch.2. Don’t keep us waiting too long!
S-Desabout 18 years agoI thought you did a great job with the characters, I really liked both of them (and obviously his wife too). Although the outcome seems obvious, I hope you throw us a curve. I'm looking forward to Ch2.
