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Brad turned and headed back to the boat, where he would sit and listen to his pretty little sister come for Lisa.
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Anonymousalmost 11 years agodon't know why he was there in the first place and why he didn't just leave. kind of dumb to just hang around and be tortured like that.
Rediguana89over 13 years agoI loved your mouse book. Absolutely astounding. And even enlightening. I'm eager to see where this goes man!! Good going! I find myself at this horrible in between emotion of jealousy and being utterly turned on.
venus_canalmost 16 years agoNice erotic start to the story - great buildup for the action that is certain to follow. You have us all at edge of our seats
venus_canalmost 16 years agoNice erotic start to the story - great buildup for the action that is certain to follow. You have us all at edge of our seats
venus_canalmost 16 years agoNice erotic start to the story - great buildup for the action that is certain to follow. You have us all at edge of our seats
stevaroonialmost 16 years agoThe little details are great; making these characters dynamic and interesting. Heh, of course it took me several paragraphs to realize just who Lisa -was-, but that was a nice tease, too.
digdaddyrichalmost 16 years agoBeing shy is one of the hardest things to overcome,I hope that the brother and sister get a chance to experience the love that they could have........Rich
zfammealmost 16 years agoyep. i agree with the other poster. it is a painful experience for Brad, if he is indeed 'in love' with his sister. i suppose i have yet to find out if it is 'love,' so i am waiting for him to get jealous too if that is the case. :D
gentilityalmost 16 years agoGood sex, well told. Putting yourself in Brads' place can be nothing but painful,and theres nothing wrong with being shy, but all he can do here is walk away.
