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Click here"My thoughts exactly; now hop to it."
"Aye, Captain."
Turning, she looked at the Orc at her side, "You heard?"
It nodded.
"Good. Now go tell your warriors; we hold here."
"Against what?"
She snorted, "Against everything!"
The Orc sniffed and turned his gleaming yellow eyes to her, "And if we fail?"
Ashunara laughed, "Obviously we die with our weapons in our hands, spitting in the eye of whoever comes for us, and trying to take as many of the bastards with us as possible."
The Orc grinned, "Good plan; like Orc plan."
"Orcs plan?"
"Always same plan: "Kill them all!"
Ashunara gave him a lop-sided grin, "Works for me. Now, best get your lads ready."
With a hungry snarl the warrior slammed his fist against his chest, "I serve!"
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- COMMENTS
billdavies4 days agoI love this so much and never want it to end`!
Just a typo I spotted though:- 'continue in that roll' should be 'continue in that role'
EmptyOwl2 months agoThe dialog, speech patterns and vocabulary of your characters is just wonderful!
magnetarhanggliding2 months agoAbsolutely loving this story. I'm especially loving the dialogue which I know is often hard to get right. The banter between characters is a joy to read.
Gortmundy2 months agoAuthorTo Anon who was put off by earliest chapters: I agree. I gave this to a few critics I trust and the feedback was universal that the earliest chapers (1-3, they said it got better from 4 onwards) were the weakest. I intend rewriting them significantly, possibly completely, once I get the story finished.
