by Stefan_J
Another great story, well written, with believable characters, even funny... fantastic. I loved it. Although I don't think, that a sequel is really necessary. The end is well done.
So far I think this could be your best story yet. You took great care on developing the main character and did a great job on setting up the mood for the whole thing.
Its was awesome man, Congratulations.
this is a great story and it is believable. great story from a great auther keep it up
hi there ,loved the story it was very well writen with an ending thats open to possibilities..i for 1 hope that there maybee a follow up piece in the making . my rating would be a 10,congratulations & regards from geoff
What a wonderful and thoughtful story.
You have great style my friend.
Best Wishes,
D.Scott.
Enjoyed reading your story. I hope Peter has more "encounters"
This story could have been very trite and hokey in the wrong hands....but you made it believable, and that is no small feat. It's particularly difficult to make an "apparition" sympathetic, but obviously that is "child's play to you. Good luck with the contest!!
Having read so many stories, I've never felt the need to write a comment. Until now.
Best damn story I've ever read! Thank you for this.