All Comments on 'Three Square Meals Ch. 060'

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GoosebumpgiverGoosebumpgiverover 1 year ago

Wow, spectacular. Completely captivating and has me spellbound. Great job.👏🏻👍🏻

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Brillinat original plot development

skippersdadskippersdadover 1 year ago

That was amazing I am glad I do not have to wait for the next chapter. This was great.

Ravey19Ravey19over 1 year ago

Wonderful. I'm a sap and enjoyed the ending.

BikingSatyrBikingSatyrabout 1 year ago

All that pulling at my heart strings to give Jade a birthday! Loved it!

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithabout 1 year ago

A continuity error; in later chapters Kali, the youngest daughter of House Loraleth, is clearly stated to be 31, yet on the first page of this chapter (#60) she is introduced as a 35-year-old, though she was the House Loraleth's youngest royal, and now she is the only survivor of her House, ... -- The excellent story's author changes his mind in later chapters, ... but this is my 5th or 6th re-read, and I noticed, .... ;-) TTFN

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithabout 1 year ago

What a freaking birthday, explosions, an assassin, death, kidnapping, a space battle (minor), a rescue, and a Nymph reborn, ... Happy birthday Jade! Great Job Tef, ... ;-) TTFN

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This was the best chapter of them all… yet I’m beyond pissed at Tefler for scaring me like that and making me cry

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uabout 1 year ago

Ok skipped ahead because I couldn’t take it. Fighting a ninja assassin. So what. Pick the bitch up and throw her through the wall, or into it since it’s steel plate. Use mussels or telekinesis he has both. Or you grabbed her so juice the bitch up, since you blew your load all over the place before holding her should alleviate any aiming issues. Or torch the scrag. Or pin her to the wall with telekinesis and use a training sword to fuck her.

You know that she’s blown up your ship and your crew is uncontactable so severely injured. This is a severe example of home invasion SO THE GLOVES ARE OFF. Yet he refuses to fight. He’s a seasoned marine officer, highly decorated for combat and was in charge of hundreds of marines in combat. Then he got triggered and is all that and more and has special skills and even more combat that’s at even higher stakes. So can’t claim surprise for his utter stupidity and lack of imagination in combat. TUNNEL VISION, I have a stick and I’m not trained so therefore I must use this stick against a seasoned assassin that’s already shown extreme skill and has two real swords…

FUCKING WANKER.

ranec1ranec112 months ago
Mean As!!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

A tear formed in Jade's beautiful emerald eyes,

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith11 months ago

-- And that massively upgraded Raptor gunship was way too much for Mikaboshi's, cobbled together, battlecruiser, ... and so, Alyssa just plain out did that poor old bad-guy ship, ... I really loved the Pulse cannons, they are so much better than the old Gatling lasers, ... and the extra powerful Beam lasers on a FTL gunship, that's so awesome too! ;-) ttfn

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith11 months ago

-- Also, I wish Jade a Happy Birthday, and I hope that next years' is a quieter one, no more dying please, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith11 months ago

-- I fully expect that Shinatobe's skillful, but barely successful attack on John will be the last of its kind to ever happen, once John's TK skills improve/strengthen, and he has psychic shields too, it will become very unlikely for him to be beaten in that type of combat ever again, ... and thanks for the warning shout, Master Yamamoto, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith11 months ago

Oh and to JackSpeed2U, yes John had a massive strength advantage over the cyborg, but not speed, those blades of hers would have sliced and diced his hands and arms if he had tried reaching for her, ... plus the story needed the kidnapping and rescue scenes, ... ;-) ttfn

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot11 months ago

IMNSHO, the seven star rating an anonymous poster gave some years ago is somewhat ridiculously low. I rated the saga at a kind of soft 8 a few chapters back, and I not put it up to 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟.

That is a solid nine.

I may have to invent some new Spinal Tap-ish rating scale before long....

Thirb_ReviteThirb_Revite10 months ago

So touching at the end. But what does Dana know about hippies? Neither she nor Alyssa are really terrans, having spent their whole lives on Carron.

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith10 months ago

Did our Jade have an exciting Birthday, or what? ... But next year, no dying, or explosions either, .... ;-) ttfn

skippersdadskippersdad7 months ago

I have read this , so many times and it still gets me .

Demented917Demented9176 months ago

Kinda cheesy.

But fun.

GrmPAGrmPA5 months ago

Damn, that was a GOOD one. Thanks, Tef.

VadarVadar4 months ago

I think we knew no one would give up on the lovely incredible Tigerlady, Jade

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Spectacular scenes. Great story arch with the birthday.

HydranDaDaHydranDaDa3 months ago

I literally threw down my phone when she died and contemplated quitting the series…. Well done sir! Can’t wait to see what happens with the two alter egos.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Occasional great chapters like this one make this story so good!

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