by Tefler
Wow, spectacular. Completely captivating and has me spellbound. Great job.👏🏻👍🏻
That was amazing I am glad I do not have to wait for the next chapter. This was great.
A continuity error; in later chapters Kali, the youngest daughter of House Loraleth, is clearly stated to be 31, yet on the first page of this chapter (#60) she is introduced as a 35-year-old, though she was the House Loraleth's youngest royal, and now she is the only survivor of her House, ... -- The excellent story's author changes his mind in later chapters, ... but this is my 5th or 6th re-read, and I noticed, .... ;-) TTFN
What a freaking birthday, explosions, an assassin, death, kidnapping, a space battle (minor), a rescue, and a Nymph reborn, ... Happy birthday Jade! Great Job Tef, ... ;-) TTFN
This was the best chapter of them all… yet I’m beyond pissed at Tefler for scaring me like that and making me cry
Ok skipped ahead because I couldn’t take it. Fighting a ninja assassin. So what. Pick the bitch up and throw her through the wall, or into it since it’s steel plate. Use mussels or telekinesis he has both. Or you grabbed her so juice the bitch up, since you blew your load all over the place before holding her should alleviate any aiming issues. Or torch the scrag. Or pin her to the wall with telekinesis and use a training sword to fuck her.
You know that she’s blown up your ship and your crew is uncontactable so severely injured. This is a severe example of home invasion SO THE GLOVES ARE OFF. Yet he refuses to fight. He’s a seasoned marine officer, highly decorated for combat and was in charge of hundreds of marines in combat. Then he got triggered and is all that and more and has special skills and even more combat that’s at even higher stakes. So can’t claim surprise for his utter stupidity and lack of imagination in combat. TUNNEL VISION, I have a stick and I’m not trained so therefore I must use this stick against a seasoned assassin that’s already shown extreme skill and has two real swords…
FUCKING WANKER.
-- And that massively upgraded Raptor gunship was way too much for Mikaboshi's, cobbled together, battlecruiser, ... and so, Alyssa just plain out did that poor old bad-guy ship, ... I really loved the Pulse cannons, they are so much better than the old Gatling lasers, ... and the extra powerful Beam lasers on a FTL gunship, that's so awesome too! ;-) ttfn
-- Also, I wish Jade a Happy Birthday, and I hope that next years' is a quieter one, no more dying please, ... ;-) ttfn
-- I fully expect that Shinatobe's skillful, but barely successful attack on John will be the last of its kind to ever happen, once John's TK skills improve/strengthen, and he has psychic shields too, it will become very unlikely for him to be beaten in that type of combat ever again, ... and thanks for the warning shout, Master Yamamoto, ... ;-) ttfn
Oh and to JackSpeed2U, yes John had a massive strength advantage over the cyborg, but not speed, those blades of hers would have sliced and diced his hands and arms if he had tried reaching for her, ... plus the story needed the kidnapping and rescue scenes, ... ;-) ttfn
IMNSHO, the seven star rating an anonymous poster gave some years ago is somewhat ridiculously low. I rated the saga at a kind of soft 8 a few chapters back, and I not put it up to 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟.
That is a solid nine.
I may have to invent some new Spinal Tap-ish rating scale before long....
So touching at the end. But what does Dana know about hippies? Neither she nor Alyssa are really terrans, having spent their whole lives on Carron.
Did our Jade have an exciting Birthday, or what? ... But next year, no dying, or explosions either, .... ;-) ttfn
I literally threw down my phone when she died and contemplated quitting the series…. Well done sir! Can’t wait to see what happens with the two alter egos.