All Comments on 'Three Square Meals Ch. 076'

Great work just short....

love how everything is playing out

just great storytelling

thank you for giving me fun things to read

that's worrysome, last time another progenitor attacked they were at full power, but this time John is comparitively very weak.

It's just wrong.. when gliding comes to mind it should be with little or no noise. At least that's my take on it. With that being said... I've enjoyed your writing immensely. I can't wait for the action packed chapters and the wormhole drive to be introduced.

In this line from page 5

Tashana looked at her in fascination. "So you'll be to speak to me telepathically?"

I suspect that the word "able" is missing from the quoted speech.

Never-the-less an exceptional and highly entertaining chapter.

Draco9881

PS I have temporally lost my password.

Interesting direction you are taking the story in tefler

Keep up the good work you seem to be doing

I love how you intergrated Tashana into the crew. Can't wait to see what abilities she has and how John plans to use that "link" she has with Irillith. Keep up the great work Tefler!

You hang me dry.... again... can't wait for another 10 days for the next chapter...

Ah nice catch, thank! I've fixed that and I'll submit an edited version at some point.

Tefler

Thanks for all the great work Tefler. It is a great story.

I don't want to be a jerk but in the third paragraph

"You'd never be able to tell what she's been though - she looks so beautiful now."

Was it meant to be 'through'?

...who just have to say first??