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Click hereI also like some change from the helpless, skanky, and stupid women that are so pervasive. Thanks for the other writers who make the women interesting.
Thank you for reading. Thank you for the constructive and useful criticism. I received a few comments on the overall length, and how I should have kept it as a one part story. You are right. This is my first story that is longer than a page. I was thinking each portion would be about 5 pages ( making it more likely to warrant a split). Turns out it was more like 3 pages. Live and learn I guess. Thanks for the advice.
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mattenw16 days agoWho gives her the right to take the law into her own hands and become a murderer?
This seems to be one of the problems in our society. Too often people take the law into their own hands.
Anonymous5 months agoNope to herky jerky........ not well written at all..... too broken up, just a lot of crap and ramblings.
bigurnabout 1 year agoSadly, we only had her reaction about being raped. No real info other than she woke up and knew he had "been inside her " . Sadly, there is too much regret after drunken sex, that then is called rape. Not saying it didn't happen or that Larry deserved what he got. Just pointing out that the story needed more details to make her version of the encounter realistic . 3 stars because of that .
dirtyoldbimanover 1 year agogood in that the wife got revenge on a rapist, predator type of boss or man. death is a little extreme but he did deserve it after finding out 3 other women were victims. page 1 of this part had an interesting line when she started whipping his cock and balls. "sound of an overripe pear hitting the floor" Really? No high pitched scream of agony or cries, sobs, etc. And Tammy made into Tamara one time.
Anonymousover 1 year agogood idea gone bad. Not clear how she got raped. Hated how she told her husband that in a way since he wasn't around it was almost his fault. Hate that she did not tell him right away.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWent a lot better in pt2. She took care of business. He admitted to himself that he gave business too much of himself shorter rations to family.
