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Click hereI also like some change from the helpless, skanky, and stupid women that are so pervasive. Thanks for the other writers who make the women interesting.
Thank you for reading. Thank you for the constructive and useful criticism. I received a few comments on the overall length, and how I should have kept it as a one part story. You are right. This is my first story that is longer than a page. I was thinking each portion would be about 5 pages ( making it more likely to warrant a split). Turns out it was more like 3 pages. Live and learn I guess. Thanks for the advice.
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Anonymous4 months agoNope to herky jerky........ not well written at all..... too broken up, just a lot of crap and ramblings.
bigurnabout 1 year agoSadly, we only had her reaction about being raped. No real info other than she woke up and knew he had "been inside her " . Sadly, there is too much regret after drunken sex, that then is called rape. Not saying it didn't happen or that Larry deserved what he got. Just pointing out that the story needed more details to make her version of the encounter realistic . 3 stars because of that .
