All Comments on 'Turning the Tables'

The fact that he was willing to forgive and forget after a multi year lying affair is simply preposterous, and speaks mightily to the situation that so many wuss men occupy in today's world. A ridiculous premise by an author that should be able to do more.

A good story but why not get the marriage annulled? If he's full of that much anger I don't see staying married, keeping touch with the kids or anything else to do with the lies. Make you a mental case.

Most necessary Information is int his story. However, as reader I would like to know more about the affair: Why, how often, why are the children from lover. Did she know about the parentage, was the lover married, what happend to him.

It is a good tale, well written for the most part, enjoyable. This does read like a 750 word contest rather than s normal submission.

Swisssshhh! Nothing but net!

So what would have happened if his wife agreed to forgive him and raise the mythical child ? What is his plan “B”?

Very good -need more stories of this nature.

A little short on the ending. Good story

Most ofthis authors stories seem to be short on endings

Cha---ching!!!

Debo concordar, cuando el autor nos dice que este es una historia corta... No sé porque lo hice... Casi todas sus historias son así ( aunque ojo, cortas o no... Son muy buenas!)

Autor, por favor, hazlas un poco más largas!

How do you stomach playing the Nice Gal, when in truth your did even worse. I'd think she would choke on the lies.

Not even close to the amount of pain the slut should have suffered. A shitty justice system and an author who has no sense of justice a shitty story makes.

way too short. the wife is basically invisible. conclusion was quite lame.

There are some stories that just need more, this was one of them.

Sorry, not my kids, not my problem. Let her figure out how to take care of them. She made the bed, let her sleep in it. Every author wants to manipulate the reader with how much dad or mom love the kids. Just not buying it. Find your real dad and take up with him girls!

Probably most men wouldn't have set her for as long as he did.

Sadly, and I think criminally, some states make cuck pay for everything and the woman skates away Scott free. Just another nali in the coffin of men's trust in women, which is why men enter into marriage at a rate of 12-13% today as opposed to 49% 20 years ago. Further men are beginning to walk away, either altogether or from long term relationships, at an accelerating rate. The MGTHW movement is gaining momentum.

3 stars. Kind of fell flat in the ending. Should have been a BTB scene, as well as hurting the real father of the girls. Story way too short for my taste.

Author is in LA LA land as far as how a Judge would be forced to handle a fraud up on the court. His former Attorney, would be in jail next to him. Not really because they don't let Co defendant talk. He would have a court appointed attorney because no attorney but the former idiot that represented him would touch his case.

But hey it was just a fantasy a story. Sometimes they come from LA LA land. Right, right.

A very nice twist in the genre. 5 stars DMW aka Sumnut96

God your stories have pathetic characters.