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Feeling like she was getting close to orgasming, I quickly removed my head from between her legs, replacing my tongue with my fingers. I wanted to get Ashley off as she'd done with me. I kissed her deeply as my fingers plunged in and out of her body. I made sure to curl them up, scraping my nails against her g spot.
It took no time for Ashley to scream into my mouth as her body tensed. I never stopped fucking her with my fingers either, determined to give her as much pleasure as she'd given me. Finally, her body relaxed and I felt her hand on mine, trying to stop my relentless fucking.
I removed my hand, sucking one finger clean and letting Ashley taste the other. We held each other close, my head on her chest. I could feel her breathing relaxing as she rubbed my back and shoulder.
I'm pretty sure we both drifted off to sleep. When I opened my eyes, the electric clock on the nightstand read 2:36 am. When I lifted my head, it roused Ashley from her light sleep. "Have to get home?" she asked, her voice a husky whisper.
"Yeah, my sister will be worried sick if I'm not there when she wakes up." I answered. Ashley nodded and we both slipped on our clothes, me in my dress sans underwear and her in just a tee shirt and shorts.
"What?" Ashely asked as my eyebrows raised looking at her attire. "I have knock-around clothes." We both giggled as we left her apartment, riding down the elevator and back to the restaurant in silence, holding hands the whole way.
"I want to thank you for an amazing night, Ashley." I said when she parked next to my car. "It was definitely one I'll never forget."
"Well, it doesn't have to be one night, you know." Ashley answered, running her fingernail up my forearm. "What are you doing next Saturday night?"
"Hmmm...Well I know this beautiful woman with whom I would love to take to a fancy restaurant for cheeseburgers, fries and the most delicious milkshake in the city." I said, caressing Ashley's thigh.
"Oh, that sounds amazing!" Ashley replied, surprising me with her enthusiasm. "Maybe then a romantic walk down by the river!"
"It's a date!" Leaning in I gave Ashley one more lingering kiss, knowing that this would probably be the last time I ever did. Then I got in my car and drove home.
- COMMENTS
GaiusPetroniusover 1 year agoI have the advantage of reading this after you've already posted the next two installments. It has been a remarkable introduction to your work.
You have a remarkable way with words. You paint beautiful, vivid scenes with your words.
Without taking any points away from the 5 stars you richly deserve, I must point out a persistent flaw of grammar and syntax in your writing. Like 97+% of Literotica authors your writing would benefit from a tutorial in the differences between transitive and intransitive verbs. Specifically, the intransitive lie/lay/lain ought not to be confused with the transitive lay/laid/laid. It's similar with rise/rose/risen (intransitive) and raise/raised/raised (transitive). Judging from this piece alone, I say that mastering the difference would move you into the pantheon of authors on this site. I look forward to reading the rest of this series and of your body of work.
lazy_readerover 1 year agoSo Dee is a spaghetti girl, a staple of a bunch of stories here. But now what does she do? Does she fight her sister for Ashley? Find her own woman?
It's apparent that Ashley knows which sister she's with, although I don't know how. Assuming that Trin goes on the next date, Ashley will have had sex with both. Is Ashley looking for a threesome?
Dessertmanalmost 2 years agoI loved it. It is well written with no distracting misspellings or grammar errors.
It definitely calls for at least 1 sequel. Please!
athompsoalmost 2 years agoGood story... until the very end. Even if that's it and there's no sequel, IMHO a slightly softer landing would be helpful, like a paragraph instead of 14 words that just dump the reader on the floor after the ride they've been on.
Having said that, reading this was worth my time. Thanks for writing it!
