All Comments on 'Twist to Remove'

An excellent tale. I like more sex in Literotica stores but this was entertaining as written. I’m looking forward to reading the rest of this author’s stories.

Bill S.

I loved the dialect. Buyer's remorse!

⭐⭐⭐ Yeah sorry, the whole cajun dialect thing was kinda annoying to read through although I do enjoy hearing it. It is a warm dialect. Keeping in mind this web site is 99% fantasy, it would have been more enjoyable if you prefaced with something like "pretend everyone speaks like Justin Wilson", or some other familiar voice with a cajun accent.

Another ripping yarn, superb!!

This was a fun read.

Jimbob44 is refreshing after reading about trust fund babies, former navy seals and gifted entrepreneurs.

I was born and raised in Minnesota. I have lived in Houston for the past 40 years. And I adore our Cajun neighbors to the east - the food, the dialect, the culture.

Jimbob44, you are a necessary contrast on this website. Thank you for the hours of reading pleasure you have provided.

5 stars, great characters that expanded on the great universe you've created. Love to see them in more stories. To the wannabe grammar nazis...WHOOSH, this obviously went over your head.

The accents sometimes are hard to make out but add so much to the stories. I love all of them!

"The man smiled as he assured George that doing a DNA test while the baby was in the Mommy was safe; the baby would not be harmed in any way. The sample was actually taken from the amniotic fluid and not the baby."

FYI, these days paternity of a baby can be determined as soon as 8 weeks into the pregnancy by a Noninvasive prenatal paternity test (NIPP) using a blood sample from the mother. This test analyzes fetal DNA found in a pregnant woman’s blood during the first trimester. A lab specialist compares the fetal DNA information to DNA from the potential father’s cheek cell sample.

Title says it all:

These stories remind me to forgive the people who wronged me because of their weaknesses

And the same stories remind me to be humble for my own failings.

I thought the MC was relatively young until that comment about Chet Atkins. Then I realized he was a 50-year-old man.

You've still got it JimBob44.

A warm, funny and unusual plot.

And the crazy slut.

A winning formula, if there ever was one.

Top ratings from me.

I love the humor that comes through your characters, even when the world is falling down around them. They always make the best of whatever happens. 5* as usual.

So pretty decent story, but some things didn't make sense for me.

Like, Polly and Samantha are quite obviously the villians, but everyone's just... Cool? Like not only did Samantha have an affair, possibly getting pregnant with another man, she tried to claim George abused her, which is a criminal offence, steal his money and bar him from his own home, Polly knew and went along with it and it's just.. glossed over? Nobody cares that these two women tried to ruin his life forever? Totally wild.

brilliant 5*

A JB44 special, and a damned good one too. Loved it.

Good story, but I wish we’d have seen a little more time spend on his ex’s regret and anguish for screwing things up so badly, and realizing she had the best one all along.

5 stars. Was worried especially with the daughter that somehow Charlene would be fridged and Samantha would reconcile with the MC but thankfully that did not happen. She might have had regrets but doesn't change what she did. That was my only real complaint with the story was just how nice George was to her. Not saying he needed to go full BTB but her actions especially with the allegations of abuse that could have destroyed his life were the actions of a toxic person who George should have only been connected to by his daughter, not friends or even friendly with. I'd worry if there was another chapter she'd try something else to try to get her old life back after she realized the grass wasn't so green with her new life.

Second time reading this, I'd give it 5 stars. Again. That would be 10 stars. If I could...

@FlynnTaggart, best revenge is a life well lived.

How much of a slap a slap in the tiddies, is it, when everyone is so nice to Samantha, considering what an absolute bastard she'd been originally.

very good, thanks. Charlene will be a super wife and MOM.

Found your story hard to follow. Seemed to jump all over the place. eg: DNA test results to determine paternity 1*

Reread 'Let Myself Believe'; wondering how William didn't go "missing" in a swamp after hitting Victoria. He's well overdue for a major karma delivery...

When do you plan to feed William to the gators (he needs to be recycled) he's a complete waste of skin.

Umm despite being coparents, why the heck is George and Charlene so nice to Samantha? Her betrayal was epic. Not just the cheating with William. But her allegations of abuse, the restraining order etc. That stuff is pure malice and would be hard to forgive. Even if he was able to move past it and move on, he would never forget it and it would always be front and center in any interactions with Samantha.

This diatribe shows ahe really doesn't have any remorse let alone desire to atone:

"Yes, George, I know. Place is a wreck," Samantha spat as George took Cynthia to the door. "But know what? You don't live here. I do. You don't live here anymore, George."

And why is that Samantha? Hmm?

Why in all holy hell is William Carter still alive? He should have been put through an industrial meat grinder so he could at least be useful for something (wolf chow, fertilizer, something?) because as a person he is worthless.

Well worth the read, enjoyed the banter⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Absurd dialogue and George is a world class wimp.

George was strong. He stayed himself and pretty wise throughout.