Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 16

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"One," she yelped. "Please spank me."

Kent kept his left hand tight on her cheek while the right swung out and back again, cracking against the same part of her flesh.

"Two," Bailey replied in a lower pitch.

She kept moving, grinding, the two of them gasping and moaning as they approached their orgasms.

"Please spank me," she said again.

He took both hands off her and, even though he knew he couldn't spank as hard, used his left hand to swat at her left cheek.

"Oh!" Bailey cried out, interrupting her rhythm in surprise. "Three."

She got back into her gyration again, driving with much more fervour.

How far does she have to push the head of my cock inside her before we're having sex? Underwear or not, we're going pretty deep here.

"Please! Again!" she called out, clearly having trouble forming words.

He slapped her right cheek, spurring her on.

"Four!" she chirped, and her moan grew louder.

The squeaks coming from her throat rose in pitch as her hips put on a burst of maniacal speed.

"Plea-" she gasped, and her body locked up, out of her control.

Kent felt it happening, knew what she'd meant to request and that her impending orgasm had interrupted her.

Hope this helps, Bai, he thought, and let her have one last hard crack on her right cheek before grabbing both of her cheeks tightly to maintain the pressure between their bodies.

"Ah!" she screamed out, her body shaking uncontrollably before seizing up again.

After several seconds of silent paralysis, Bailey's body relaxed.

"Fi-" she gasped, then controlled herself, took a deep breath, and added, "Five."

Bailey looked over her shoulder at Kent.

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"Did you come?" she asked him.

Oh, my god, she wondered inside her head. What in the hell was that? I can't even remember my own name. He even knew to spank me when I couldn't speak.

"Not yet," Kent breathed back at her, his eyes wide with his own arousal.

Gotta do him. Gotta do him.

"Okay," she said. "Okay."

I wanna see him come. I wanna see his face when he comes.

Bailey turned herself around again and dropped back on him.

"Like this?" she asked.

He nodded.

Way too sensitive. Way too much. Can't handle this.

The sensations as she ground against him overloaded her, made her feel like drowning.

Kent put his hands on her hips, shifted her down a little, so her vagina met the lowest part of his erection.

"There?"

"Yeah, there."

"Okay," she nodded and kept grinding him. "Come for me."

"Uh-huh," he gasped, holding tight to her hips.

I wanna see his face, wanna know what he looks like.

"Soon," he whispered.

"Kent?"

"Yeah?"

"Can you reach?"

"Reach?"

"My ass."

"Yea... yeah."

"One free one," she prodded him, feeling her own eyes light up as she glared at him. "Right when you come."

"Oh, god," Kent's hand found her left cheek.

"Come on, come on," she urged him, knowing her genitals couldn't take the sensations much longer, but willing herself to survive until Kent reached his orgasm.

A loud grunt came out of his throat and she felt his hand leave her cheek.

Oh, god, what was I thinking?

His face locked in a wide-eyed rictus of a man terrified of a great plunge over a waterfall. She felt his erection twitch first, the base of his shaft expelling semen into his shorts, and his hand came crashing down on her all-but-bare cheek, twice as hard as any of the other spankings today.

"Fuck!" she screeched in surprise, but kept twisting her hips to milk him dry.

His cock surged against her, five or six solid twitches of ejaculation.

"Fuck," Kent sighed in agreement as his orgasm faded away.

Bailey disengaged the moment Kent seemed to be done, feeling a little sorry for her sore genitals. She fell sideways, her head landing on his shoulder.

"You okay?" Kent whispered, a hint of apology.

"Yeah, it's fine," she assured him, only then remembering her full name. "I'm fine."

"Good," he gasped again. "I thought I might have been too hard."

Bailey smirked, "If I couldn't handle it, I wouldn't have offered."

"Sure," Kent agreed. "Wow. Alright."

A contented silence lay over them for several minutes, both panting and recovering their breath.

"So," Kent started.

"So?"

"Things are okay now? You and Laura?"

"I guess so," Bailey offered. "I can never be sure what she's thinking."

"But you're not angry anymore? About the two dollars?"

Bailey nestled deeply into the crook his shoulder. "I am definitely not angry anymore."

"Alright, then," Kent let out a breath of contentment. "Then everyone is happy."

"Exactly."

Comfortably in his embrace, Bailey considered what she should tell him.

He deserves at least a little warning.

"You should, um, be careful with Laura," she ventured.

"I wasn't?"

"Oh, you're doing fine," she assured Kent quickly. "Just, in the future, you know?"

Kent turned his head to look down at her and brushed her hair behind her ears, "In the future?"

"She's never had a boyfriend," Bailey tried to clarify. "No one's ever... even... touched her. You know? Until you."

"Touched her? Like?"

"Like anywhere," Bailey enunciated. "Every place you touch her, you're the first one."

Got it, buddy?

"Jesus," Kent cursed softly. "Wait just a goddamn second."

"Yeah?"

"She's never been touched, or kissed, or made out with anyone?" he asked.

Bailey nodded against his chest.

"And then she came here and I spanked her? That's her first... thing?"

When you put it that way, it sounds bad.

"Well, yeah, I guess."

"Bai?" Kent said. "I... well, what's done is done."

"What's done is done," Bailey agreed reluctantly. "I wonder how good a friend I'm being, though, now that you mention it."

Kent shrugged, "That's between you and her, I guess. For me, what matters is that she chose it."

Kent has a point there, Bailey realized, I've told Laura about the boyfriends I had before I met her and she didn't seem nearly as interested. But we were drinking and I mentioned this... this thing with Kent, and then...

"She definitely did choose it," Bailey agreed. "Enthusiastically."

Kent grunted.

After a short pause, he added, "I need a shower. You?"

"I'm good," Bailey answered.

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khollen2khollen211 months ago

I love reading the comments almost as much as the story, almost LOL. I love the mind games, and let's face it, good sex is more mental than physical. Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Don't try this at home children

Just in case there is anyone reading this who doesn't realise it is a fantasy that skips over inconvenient details, please be advised that cotton underwear does not make an effective condom. Full penetration is not needed for to get pregnant..

xtorchxtorchabout 5 years agoAuthor
"...more characters in the intimate part of the story..."

Yes.

Not that I'm not up to it, but one more character means 3 more relationships to keep track of. It makes it trickier and there's already a rich enough set of complications to handle just with the 3 people I have now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
sooooo many opportunities for more story

I'm a bit sceptical about more characters in the intimate part of the story.

At least in an active role. A secret viewer or accidential witness would be a completely different thing :)

Which, in turn, would require an adventurous location again. Something for the weekend, cinema, musuem, a hike in mother nature, doing sports ...

Opportunities enough for more girl-contests, challenges, Kent-the-gentleman, anythinging-Laura and similar. ..

xtorchxtorchabout 5 years agoAuthor
Laura’s mother?

I hadn't even thought of that. That's a completely different fetish but I could imagine it as an alternative universe, single-chapter, branch of this reality.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Idea

Perhaps involving Laura’s mother?

xtorchxtorchover 5 years agoAuthor
Mini-climaxes

I feel like the whole "Laura spanking Bailey" thing deserved its own little arc, so I'm glad you liked it. It seems to be a popular chapter, too, but it *is* odd that I haven't seen any comments until now. The forums are also down at the moment, so maybe there's a technical problem? Usually, I get 9 or 10.

Laura is in a very tenuous position, of course, balancing her friendship with Bailey against her own sexual desires, and all that against her guilt. The other players are going to be cautious, naturally.

As for messy endings, it would be hard to go without, since they're clearly not completely ready for penetration yet. One of the nice things about written erotica, vs. visual, is that the messy endings don't have to visible. Blowing his load just under her panties is fine and I don't have to arrange things artificially so an HD camera can squeeze in there to see it.

I don't think I intentionally cut out any internal dialogue. Most of 16 was written before I got feedback on 15, but 15 had an unusual amount of Laura's internal dialogue, so maybe 16 just seems light by comparison?

Anyway, if you have trouble commenting, you can always send me a personal message. Those probably still work, and if you're anonymous, I can answer it on twitter.

Thanks!

@XavierTorch

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
strange, this is the third (non appearing) attempt to comment

Absolutely great chapter!

It really feels like a story arc from the party till now has found it's little climax here.

If you want to go again for those little 3-4 chapter arcs, I 'm in! I like them, though waiting for the next is a pain.

Most funny things for me: Kent really needs it spelled out to get the clue and they still haven't had penetrating sex. Yeah! :)

But could you please keep my other "messy" fetish in mind. I felt it was a bit short in this one *blush*

By the way the whole chapter feels like you have cut stuff (dialogue? things in their minds?) out before releasing it.

Back to the story: chapter 17 has to pick on the development. Now that they have more or less spelled out their urges, I still hope for gentlemen Kent to "anything" Laura "anywhere" . And as far as Bai is concerned it won't hurt but only do more good for everybody.

Perfect :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great #16. It feels a bit like a little climax since 12-16 have been like an arc.

Yet, somehow, in comparison, it feels as if you have shortened it and cut something out of the final version?

When I add the spankings and the time in the story, this have been the hardest days for Bai's ass, and even now you managed to avoid penetrating sex.

Wonderful :)

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