All Comments on 'Two Pregnant Moms - and Sis?'

Good story. Hope there is a chapter 2 soon

What happened to Vanessa? Also things moved along to fast and the scenario really wasn't suited for such a short story. It started off good then felt rushed after the first page. Rushing the story is the worst thing to can do.

A good premis, it did seem rushed at times, maybe should have been spread over 2 chapters - but a good one anyway.

A rushed ending hurt a good start i mean did talk to his dad and how did it go if he did you acted like you were in a hurry to finish that you just ended it suddenly

Three times the women, three times the pleasure, but three times the headache. Good luck with that. An amusing and hot tale in any case.

Very sexy story.

The start and build-up was good in general. I also really don't like endless teasing, but from when the 1st sex scene happened with the mother until the end it seemed rushed. It was obvious that something in the cottage was supposed to happen between mom and son, but that they did it just like that, when they arrived, came a little bit out of nowhere. Kat’s fall seemed even more rushed. Least but not last, there was hardly a buildup with the sister. Could be a much better story…