All Comments on 'Un-Merciful Heart'

So what if the plot doesn't hold up to nit picking scrutiny? It is creative and a welcome change from the typical LW fare. Well done, Chagrined. Thank you for this series.

The story fell apart when the cop saw Strickland at the school and didn’t arrest him. “Get out of town” is the stupidest thing ever, to a convicted child molester.

Oh, I totally need to see more of Mr Turner. Write moar please.

Oh, I totally need to see more of Mr Turner. Write moar please.

Goooood. I can feel your anger. Take your weapon and strike him down. Use your aggressive feelings boy, late the hate flow through you. He he he

This chapter has me channeling Palpatine and cheering on Turner lol.

WOW!!!!!! He deserved what happened for ruining a family and twice as much for being a child predator. Chilling stories.

Turner is destined to be a great literotica character.

por favor envíenme la cuenta corriente del sr. Turner para depositarle un agradecimiento

Would you say this was poetic justice? Would you?

Excellent, solid 5

A sequel in which Turner's watch over his kids helps him recover his humanity would be a writing challenge but an interesting one.

Great story. Perfect revenge.