- Loving Wives
- Unfaithful
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Click hereShe laughed and said, "Because I'm not a lady——I'm a lawyer," then, taking my hand, she led me out into a cold December night.
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- COMMENTS
AA82ndAAabout 21 hours agoI forgot that you have an aversion to finishing your stories. My bad. No more for me.
Anonymous5 days agoThe wife simply jetting off to cure Ebola with her trusty gal pal was not at all a satisfying conclusion. Although the MC may not have deserved a more definitive outcome, the reader certainly did. RG's choices and motivations are far too often obscure.
Anonymous18 days agonope, this is a fucked up story. Left all sorts of dropped ends with no resolve. Just a big waste of reading to no where. (-)5000 stars
Anonymous28 days agoEven with the lame conclusion, I have to rate this as five stars. Well conceived developed and written
JPB NOT BOB
Vulcan_in_Ohio29 days agoI commented on this story about 6 years ago and now, reading it for a third time, I still think it’s an original and well-written submission. There are a few grammatical errors and so forth but the story itself is a page-turner and has a well-integrated plot. Still 5 stars!
Anonymous2 months agoOne small thing: I don't understand why, when Jimmy asked who gave Simone a ride home, he didn't tell her that he overheard Farajy and Curoso planning on trying to screw her. If she knew she was being talked about by them this might have stopped every thing and he would not have appeared to be just a jealous husband. He had the right to be jealous.
Anonymous2 months ago90% of the story was about the legal aspects. His wife seemed an afterthought.
Also, he seemed emotionally completely detached, sort of: "Yawn, oh well." mindset.
Abrupt ending and needs a finish.
peter54peter2 months agoLove the story, but it sort of died at the end, could probably get another story out of it.
But well done regardless
Nallus2 months agoToo complicated because of the number of characters.
Not sure who went up river, whose marriage survives.
A glossary of characters maybe?
