All Comments on 'Virus'

This is more a technical document than a story.

Umm....Fantasy jargon? Incredibly detailed bullshit. You could teach a class.

So Where is the actual story to this intro?

For something that I was only getting the bare bones of! The repetition felt hypnotic too - am I about to get 'the virus'??

I'm always impressed by the variety of your work. :-)

Jukebox just showed you the technical version of how an unsuspecting person can be changed into a horny submissive hypnoslut. This is awesome work.

Love it. Reading this story gave the strange sensation of being unwittingly exposed to something, myself, while reading the clinical and dispassionate terminology. It felt as if something was slipping through under the radar while my own cognitive processes were challenged to remain at a higher and more abstract level. It was a fascinating feeling.

Brought to mind an erotic SCP article, great work!