All Comments on 'Was It All Worth It?'

Loved this but it left me wondering what happened to Beth? Did she ever get to speak to him again or have remorse over what she did?

Was she living in a trailer park?

Great story. One of my three favorites. Keep 'me comin'

Started sex again putting kids to bed etc

,???

Good dad?

Great story, with n even better burn. Maybe using the drugs wasn't kosher, but it was effective , and satisfying. Traded up on wives too. Winner!

fuck the whore

You most always do a good job. No

You're drunk.

What happened to Beth,she is entitled to see her kids?.

Five Stars!

jtwheels; one of the most incoherent comments I've ever read. The recording tech was a bit off but a very good BTB and the kids get to stay in the same school system with their friends. Signed: BTW

Why would he be getting all Beth's drinks,she would be mingling.Even if he laced her drinks with alcohol,she must have noticed and why would she go home for just a salad?.Also she must have realised it could only be him who put the drugs in her purse and what excuse would the police have for stopping her and looking in her purse.

Probably angry at the anti kink references

enjoyed the story, would've liked to read more about Beth's situation though

I was just curious as to what happened to the assholes.

It was good but it would gave been better with a reaction from the cheaters.

Glad he had some self respect!!!!

A VERY GOOD STORY. LOVE THE WAY STEVE HAD THE SOLUTION TO KEEP THE KIDS AND MOST OF THE MONEY. I WOULD HAVE LIKED A LITTLE MORE DETAIL ABOUT BETH AND CARL'S DILEMMA AND THEIR REACTION TO STEVE AND SUE'S CONNECTION.

it was ok..

I love it when the husband puts the final nail in both cheaters coffin, and then buries them.

Easy 5 stars but I agree with anonymous below - what did the cheaters feel when discovered? Could there have been a final discussion with Beth where she begged forgiveness and tried to explain or justify what she had done? Still a very good story.

Excellent story, I enjoyed the BTB and the happy ending ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Robound relationship are bound to fail... especially ones based on revenge and sex... this one will be no exception.

Great story. 5*s. - But really needs an editor.

Great story for the BTB trolls. I bet they loved it :)

Excellent. Only thing missing is to hear the regrets of the cheaters.

A cute story. Wish there was more follow-up with the cheaters but otherwise a great story.

Not only BTB, by t BTB also!

A twofer!

Well done!

Bill

26thNC said all that needs to be said. I do think it's funny when people comment about the characters future relationships like they're actual people. Fiction people look it up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

A BTB&B

Burn the bitch and bastard. Fantastic story

Thank you for this, Slirpuff. "Was it all worth it?" earns a rare 5-stars. Not nearly as detailed as I would have preferred, far too brief a distraction from real life; but a proofed and edited story that doesn't veer off into bloody violence sates revenge desires that run deep 40+ years after I dumped my own cheating slut of a duplicitous wife.

When trust shatters, everyone reacts differently. Me, I never seriously considered physical violence, but never climbed back in the saddle, either. The rise of HIV and loose tatted feminists were not appealing. Nor did I turn to drink or drugs. Secured a timely, evidence-heavy divorce, kept the house for a tidy pre-great Recession ROI, thus avoiding splitting a sizeable inheritance from my grandfather. Slid into depression, though, spent my remaining years in seclusion to ensure I'd never again be burned. At 77, there's snow on the rooftop and the furnace is faltering, but I still partake in and am content with "soft-handed" daydreams laced with bittersweet saudade.

The bonus of a romantic happy ending was much appreciated, although that BJ from a black whore was a banal, disgusting stretch, like a fart with hang time in a crowded elevator. Sorta diminished his claim on fidelity OR good taste. Literotica is littered with too many stories of abuse/humiliation/cheating that nearly always devolve into nauseating race-mixing and often conclude with a preposterous "and they lived happily ever in a fake/open marriage" whimper, the manipulative slut wife and a hapless cuck who sticks around because he's a sap. (barf) Cheers.

Great story! It could have happened.

why is being a "nice guy" a problem? If a woman can't handle that than I am sorry but I am not going to change that for anyone.. I value my creators opinion far more than any woman or man.

Just wanna be a goody goody.

Just bunch of Wimps.

Women and Pussy.

Maaan Men are such stupids.

Q. How to control A Men oh sorry Wimps?.

Ans... Just gave them pussy. And they will obey you Like Dogs. just Like a Pig in the Puddle.

While I generally enjoy his stories, this one, on the second time around, really hit me as nothing new. From her attitude, to...well, pretty much everything about her. She was standard LW fare, she could fit into almost any story here and no one would be the wiser.

“Steve has never took my ass.”- Beth. This comment tells us that Steve is not bi sexual, and has never been in prison.

Well, was it worth it???

Comment from Anon about Anal sex. Plenty of men and women do it, and if doesn’t make them gay. Look at it like this- If you kiss a woman, does that mean you want to kiss men? Just because they both have a rectum, does not make it interchangeable.

5 stars, for the store.

As Rhymin’ Simon once said” One man’s ceiling , is another man’s floor”

Or as I say, “ One man’s prude, is another man’s whore!”

5 stars.

Great Story! Loved It!

Thanks for your writing.

Good one! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

4 stars

It would have been good the hear what happened to Beth, and maybe why

Nice way to end the story! 5*

Pure fantasy.

Cute

I'm only finishing page 1, but have to write. I wonder if this author knows the English language at all? Or does he (I suppose) re-read what's written? There's punctuation mistakes all around. Words left out (Beth asked him if he's going to the BBQ & said "I'm going with or without so I don't..." as a prime example). That's already giving me a headache. If the author doesn't want/ can't do it, there's all types of help on the internet, or get a proofreader. The better authors all do it!

--- Beth gets angry that he's accusing her of cheating, but meanwhile she's giving all types of excuses, seriously telling her husband he doesn't really do it for her anymore. I'm withholding my rating with the presumption that I can finish this story. Bob

I think you story, Esther and me, was the apex of your writing.

Having read many of your others the frankly pall by comparison. I'd suggest that you look at that story and use similar creativity in your stories going forward.

If you'll read several you other stories as a comparison I think you might agreem

2 stars. Finally getting around to finishing this. The subject & story line was good, & I liked how the story ended. Especially with that party scene & Steve asking Sue to get married. However!!

Getting to the end was difficult. As mentioned, punctuation mistakes, words left out/ wrongly put, & that whole thing with him getting drugs to frame both Carl & his wife. I get the reason, I just think it's slightly on the unbelievable side. No word on their sentencing, or what each did after their divorces. It's all part of this story. I notice the commenter below me saying this story's the apex of your writing. I beg to disagree. Read a couple stories better written. Just finished "How High A Price", which not only hit home in some ways, but a virtual powerhouse. Unlike this one.

In the end, instead of grading this a possible 4, there's enough to downgrade the story to 2 stars. Bob

Nice revenge on the cheaters

All the spelling and grammar errors made this a difficult read. Idea was good 2**

1* and here’s why:

- no closure

- why the fuck do their friends think he’s gay?!

This would have been a heart story except for one action. He should never had let her seduce him into pity sex after she withheld sex for a month. He should have blown her and her teddy bear off.

Very good work.

Well girls from an early age like to play dress up. So it is understandable that women like sexy lingerie. A man or at least for me it is a waste of money. There is NOTHING more sexy or sexually stimulating than looking at a women’s nude body. OK there is always an exception. And mine is those black sexy thigh high nylons coupled with those 4 inch heals. But they don’t cover a women’s physical beauty. To the point after one month without sex he should have never fell for her sexy teddy. He should now expect another month dry spell. Not a way to live.

Gave it a 5. Would've been a 4, but the last paragraph bumped it up. Lol

Excellent!

I would think that he would be thinking about Beth saying his dick was too little and then Sue said he was smaller and then proved it by deep throating him with no effort. He would have been very aware of how loose her pussy was and that would have probably shrunk his dick up into his stomach. I can't think how getting Carl's leavings is any better for him with Sue than it was with Beth. Too much history there. Would also be hard to stay in that same house looking at Carl's paint job and the bed he decorated with his spend.

Entertaining…

4 stars for a decent BTB.

Nice ending and the cheaters got what they deserved- deprived of hurting further the people that loved them. Some call this "BTB", but in this story the wife was only somewhat singed (not carted off to a brothel somewhere) AND (even though I am not happy what he did) this was really almost required so that the MC wasn't the one getting burned down. My feeling is that "no fault" is simply wrong and that the innocent party should not be getting screwed over a second time by the legal system.

Once again another great story⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

One thing. Beth was supposed to have knocked over two mailboxes. Did the police find front end damage on her car? She was supposed to be under the influence of cocaine or other drugs while driving. No blood test? BTW Four stars for an okay story.

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JPB NOT BOB

Super entertaining tale. A- on those grammar things which by the way don’t mean the story is any less of a sucess. Characters grabbed my attention. The emotion was there though I always crave more. The why she did it would have been nice. (She learned about the bigger dick after she decided to cheat). Outcome was good. BTB is so fulfilling when there is a slut wife. Hurting her fuck buddy is always a plus.

Thanks for share of your talents - though it appears you have abandoned this site. John.