What Did You Really See?

Story Info
The Close Up View.
3.2k words
2.96
26.6k
16
Share this Story

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
Odiouser
Odiouser
386 Followers

This is my approved continuation of What Did You Really See by WordAssociation published in Jan. '22

I wrote it in such a way that you won't be lost if you read this as a stand-alone, but you can better appreciate the characters and the start of this saga if you do read the initial story first. Just look up "What Did you Really See" in the Loving Wives alphabetical index or, even faster, go to Search Authors and look up author WordAssociation to find it in his 'Stories' list.

The original story starts out a tad slowly, but don't give up; the pace soon picks up and it is a sexy read.

Tommy and Chrystal didn't have to wait more than a week after that eventful Pool Party at the Carson's to get another invitation from them. Bethany called on Chrystal's phone and invited them over to Jared's and her place for the following Sunday in their magnificent pool.

She covered the phone and filled me in. The invite was just for the two of us, not the entire neighborhood as last week. I was half-way amazed, but all the way energized by the potential this implied. I nodded my head, trying not to have my wife see me as TOO excited.

"I'm game, if you want to, honey," He whispered.

"Tommy and I would love to join you, Beth." She said. The two discussed the time and menu.

"Great. Tommy will bring a few bottles of that Kenwood Chardonnay we enjoyed so much last time." Chrystal laughed at something Bethany said and clarified, "Oh my goodness, by 'a few' I just meant 3 bottles, maybe 4 if you expect us to be overnight guests. My husband is a lot more fun with some vino under his belt, but not so much that he can't perform...act like a gentleman, you know."

'God what a slip-up' she thought.

'Wonderful,' Bethany thought 'I guess Chrystal intuits what we have in mind.'

Tommy thought 'what the fuck does Chrystal think is going to require me to 'perform'?'

The week that followed passed like a snail in the near lane. The two talked about the upcoming agenda extensively and agreed that to have been the only couple invited back after Tom had grabbed Bethany's tit at the same time Jared had his hand fondling Chrystal's bare ass was certainly not just a coincidence. 'What should we think is up for Act 2?'

Chrystal says, "I want to see how she reacts when you get both her titties in your big manly hands, my dear."

He reciprocated "I will hold on long enough that Jared's hand finishes checking out everything you have under your swimsuit, honey. I'm sure he hadn't planned on stopping his explorations so prematurely."

"No, he certainly didn't act like he was satisfied. And since at that moment I was sure you had your cock inside Mrs. Carson, I just had decided to let Jared explore me all he wished."

"So, I suppose at the very least we can assume the next pool party starts off where that one left off." He ventured.

Bethany ponders for all of 2 or 3 seconds and says, "I suppose," with a very big smile. The two just sat there on the couch, playing kissy-feely with each other for several minutes.

Tommy finally broke the silence "It is more than obvious where the Carsons are planning to take this. So, if we are firmly unwilling to play that game, now is when we should call it off, honey. It would be awkward as hell for us to go just a little bit farther and then you say 'OMG Jared, I didn't plan on you taking your big cock out'!"

Chrystal suppressed a snicker, "I can't quite imagine me ever saying anything like that. And I frankly don't think there is a 'big' cock in the picture here...". Grin.

"Honey, I am happy to take this farther, but, unless you have been fooling me all these years, you have only had one cock in your pretty places in your whole life. I think you know that won't be true after another visit to the Carsons."

"I do know that my love." She smiled.

Neither raised the topic again in the days before they had to leave to the party at the Carson's. They had silently conceded the fact that, by not talking further about this issue, they were implicitly buying into the idea that this would be a wide-open sexual get together.

They arrived just before 4 pm and were greeted by two exuberant and friendly hosts and taken into the library which featured a huge snooker table that he remembered from their prior visit. Tom presented them with the 4 bottles of chilled chardonnay, and Jared proceeded to uncork one, filling 4 wine glasses on the side counter.

With modest, quickie hugs they sat down in the library to chat, the Carsons in chairs close together and the Taylors just across from them. "I'm SO glad you guys could come." gushed Bethany."

"Oh, we were so happy to be invited, especially since things got maybe a bit out of the ordinary two weeks ago." Tom ventured. His polite smile tried to make it clear that he thought the activities had been pleasant from his point of view.

Jared piped in, "Well, they were not 'out of control' compared with the goings on at any party with our usual crowd, Tom. As I recall, you only had your hand on my wife's boob for a couple of seconds. When those people are here, her breasts are usually out in the open and pretty much available to everyone most of the night."

"JARED!" Bethany squawked. "There is no reason for you to talk like that, big mouth."

"Honey, it WAS only a few seconds. Tommy's wife and I were watching from the balcony."

"That is NOT what I got upset about and you know it." She said. "And just tell me why you were on the balcony with Chrystal, my sweetie?"

Jared blushed a bit. "I already told you everything there is to know about why we were on the balcony, and what we saw."

"AND what you were doing to our sweet innocent Chrystal while you watched?" his wife retorted.

Chrystal felt it was time for to chime in, "I can't claim to be totally innocent Bethany. After all, I never spoke a word in complaint."

"I can back that up Chrystal." Tom offered. "In fact, she was smiling the whole time she was telling me about Jared's hand working her bare ass."

We all broke out laughing at that. Jared spoke up. "Well, I gather Chrystal has told her husband all about my ungentlemanly behavior at the party and that is in good part why we wanted to have the two of you over, to be sure there were no hard feelings or anything."

I responded, "Well I think you and I both had some 'hard feelings' back then Jared, but we are all cool with it now I think."

Jared thrust out his hand, "Shake on it buddy. No harm was done, and I think all four of us enjoy the memories. So, let's enjoy the evening."

Jared opened a second bottle and refreshed our glasses, and then sat down on a 5th chair, on the other side of Chrystal's seat. That left Bethany awkwardly alone across from the other three. Shortly after, as Tom arose to use the restroom, he returned and plopped down in the now vacant seat next to Bethany. He skootched it indiscreetly closer to hers, as he thought that might have been Jared's intent in the first place.

"This is the hottest part of the summer day" Jared said. We'll have dinner about 6 and then go out to the pool as it starts to cool down a bit."

"Sounds like a plan," Chrystal responds. "You have a most impressive pool table, Jared. My hubby used to be a hot shot player before I properly domesticated him."

He husband interrupted her, "That is a snooker table, hon. The balls are smaller, with smaller pockets, and I only played that a few times."

"Well then" Jared asked, "want to give it a try, Tom?"

"Why not? But not more than a penny a point." Grin.

They played two games. Tom got beat 100 to 11 in the first and improved to where he only lost by 60 points in the second.

"See. It's all coming back to you Tom. But now let's eat some of Beth's offering." He got up and chivalrously helped Chrystal rise out of her chair. Such a well-mannered host he seemed to be. His own wife faired for herself just fine. He escorted us to their dining room, his hand on Chrystal elbow.

Jared had clearly taken it unto himself to shepherd Chrystal every step of the way, and Tom couldn't help but wonder if his chivalry would extend its way onto the poolside a bit later. Jared seemed to be thinking that Chrystal was his duty and privilege having so thoroughly explored her bare heinie the last time they were here.

The repast was o.k. Certainly forgettable with the lamb chops a bit on the dry side. But Chrystal gave the string-bean and mushroom casserole a well-deserved yummm as she munched it down.

Bethany took the lead conversational role as they cleared the table after a light desert. "I see you two brought towels and what I suppose to be swimsuits rolled in them, but it is still pretty hot outside and I think we would normally go skinny dipping if it was o.k. with you two."

"Of course, whatever the hosts suggest." Chrystal replied, without even looking to her hubby for a nod. Her husband got the inkling of a boner coming on and hastened to nod his head in agreement. He hadn't thought their hosts would bring issues to a head so quickly.

Jaren led the parade out to the poolside tables, but he did not attempt to chivalrously help Chrystal out of her clothes. Each of the four accomplished a somewhat clumsy disrobing. The guests tried not to stare at either of the hosts and acted like they had done this sort of thing many times before.

Tom just couldn't keep his eyes off Bethany as she pulled off her panties to finalize her disrobing. Gorgeous is the first word that came to his mind. That Kardashian behind, which Tom had such a brief encounter with two weeks ago, was fronted with a freshly shaved vagina that seemed to all but glow in the late afternoon light. Not to even mention the two prettiest breasts in the tri-county area.

He could feel his dick filling out as he glanced at Jared and couldn't suppress a grin at his host's waving flag as he stared unashamedly at Chrystal's blond muff.

She calmly observed "I see that a cleanly shaved vagina is the proper look for your private pool parties, so I promise to be more properly shaven the next time should you invite us again."

Jared jumped all over that, "Wait, wait, no you will not need to shave, mam. I love...I mean I can't take my eyes off of it, it is perfectly beautiful just like it is. Do not do anything to...change."

"Don't get upset Jared. I think we will probably like it bare just fine. Won't we Tommy?"

"Yeah, for sure princess. What husband doesn't want his wife to shave her pretty pussy before she shows it off to company?' he replied.

"NO, Tom!" Injected the only half-jesting host. "I mean, it is not up to me to say, but I am falling in love with your wife, I mean with her pussy. And I beg you not to let her shave that perfect thing. At least not until I have gotten to know it much more intimately."

Thinking that sounded wonderful, Chrystal was classy enough not to say another word about her vagina. She reached out for her husband's hand, but the ever-vigilant host thrust his hand into hers ahead of him, leading her to the head of the ladder into the pool. While waiting for Chrystal to descend Jared bent over preparing to take the ladder himself. That left his package dangling freely over the top step and almost into her hair.

Tom couldn't help but watch his wife's eyes as she stared at Jared's equipment. He couldn't say whether his wife's focus was on his penis, or more on his sack, but she could surely see both clearly from the span of maybe 3 feet from her eyes to his package. This was by no means sexual foreplay; everyone took it as just the natural result of swimming together nude.

Tom then took Bethany's hand in the gentlemanly way and led her to the steps, keeping a more respectful distance, but nevertheless very aware of her naked breasts as they breached the water line and floated briefly. GOD this nudity lifestyle was the best!

The guests had no clue what to do next. This was a first for them. Bethany saved the day by suggesting that the 4 of them try to recreate the controversial moments of the events two weeks ago. "Just to show how it was no big deal that anyone should fuss about."

Everyone quickly agreed and Bethany headed out to mid-pool to assume the position she had been in when she had previously gotten in contact with Tom. Sans swim suite, of course.

Chrystal looked at Jared in doubt. "Are we supposed to put our swimsuits back on and go up to the bedroom balcony like we were then?" She asked him.

Holding her forearms in front of her, the host said "It's up to you my lovely. I think swim suites are history for tonight. But, when we do go up to my bedroom, I think we should promise our spouses to be back in an hour or two."

"If you tell me that is all the time you want." Chrystal flirted. She noticed a definite boner as he took her hand and led her to the house. Their spouses both saw that his hand slipped down to Chrystal's butt cheek as they stepped in the door, and she jiggled her buns a bit.

He snickered in return. "Just to remind the spouses who this perfect ass belongs to tonight?" Jared teased.

Chrystal replied, "I don't think they are in any doubt it belongs totally to Jared Carson. No need to move your hand."

As they headed upstairs, his hand stayed in her butt crack to help urge her up the steps. Her mind was racing with the knowledge that this exciting party was well and truly on.

A few weeks ago, she could have said that only her husband and her doctor had laid eyes on her nakedness since she was a child, and now she was becoming perfectly comfortable with this neighbor fondling her bare ass as if they were old lovers. She rather liked it.

Jared led them to the door of the master bedroom where she hesitated briefly; he put himself behind her and pushed her ahead playfully using his firm woodie to prod her in the right direction. She put her hand behind her and firmly grabbed his weapon, giggling as she awkwardly moved forward.

Edging their way out onto the balcony, they looked down to the pool, spotting their equally naked spouses holding hands. "They look like such a happy couple" observed Jared with a smile. Chrystal smiled at that comment, while she wrapped her left hand around the hard cock behind her. She took hold of it firmly enough to lead her host back into his marital bedroom.

Down below, Tom and Bethany held hands as they stepped into the pool. He couldn't keep his eyes off her naked beauty. He had an outrageous hard-on that he hoped his wife could not spot from her balcony perch. When he last glimpsed her, she seemed to be largely engaged with someone else's cock altogether.

"Bethany, where exactly were we at when all the fun began? I'm not sure."

She moved up closer to him, softly wrapping her hand around his burgeoning cock. Far from resisting her gesture of friendship, he placed a hand on the back of her head and drew it close for a very wet kiss. "Lover," she murmured, just shut up and fuck me. We don't want our spouses to get too far ahead of us, do we?"

That caused him to look back up at the balcony just in time to see his naked wife disappearing back into the master bedroom with, it looked like, her hand on her host's frontage, and his hand very clearly working its way into her buns. "Looks like they plan to get the jump on us Mrs. Carson."

"Jumping your wife is about all my husband has been thinking about since you accepted our invitation. If you have any other thoughts in mind you better grab her right this minute and take her home."

Suddenly he sees the balcony door pushed open again and his nude wife race back out onto the balcony waiving down at his position in the pool. She kisses her hands and throws the 'kisses' down his way, with a strong wave of the hand. Tom breaks out it a smile of relief. Of course, there was no reason for him to fear for Chrystal's safety, but he still felt satisfaction with her gesture.

Whatever was about to happen to her in the house, it was what she wanted to have happen, and nothing ugly. Tom eagerly waived back in her direction, not knowing if she could see him or not. Bethany joined him in his wave, her beautiful, bountiful breasts bouncing with the effort.

All this energetic positioning suddenly slowed to a crawl as the mismatched couples settled down in their respective retreats. Jared calmly escorted Chrystal to his bedside and helped her crawl into it. She showed nothing but eagerness to join him, knowing full well that her host was going to have sex with her, lots and lots of sex.

Bethany led her guest to an oversized chaise lounge at pool's edge and pulled him down with her to the cushion. "You're the boss of me Thomas. Right now my husband is showing your wife exactly what he expects of her for the weekend and I don't think you will have a thing to say about it. The good news is, that you have his wife for your own pleasure.

"I get the picture." Says Tom and he reaches for his hostess's magnificent tits.

"If I know my husband, he will already be taking plenty of pictures. He will want to document every dot and tittie of tonight's conquest. I overheard him telling his poker buddies last night exactly what he was going to do with your pretty Chrystal, and he will want to prove every bit of that."

Tom didn't quite know what to say about all this, but the notion of Jared's buddies seeing color pics of Chrystal having full on sex with him was, quite frankly, pretty much a turn on.

They both could hear a muffled scream suddenly coming from upstairs and Bethany didn't even try to stifle her laugh. "The only thing you can do at this point, Tom, is fuck his wife in return."

Realizing the inevitable truth of what she said, he followed her advice.

Odiouser
Odiouser
386 Followers
Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
27 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I think it's high time Odi just comes straight out the closet and admits he wants a big beautiful dick to suck on himself.

It's OK bro. You don't have to beard your characters with wives in your stories anymore...and lead up to the point where your characters wanna start eating creampies from the wife's skanky holes.

Just skip right to the part where you wanna take the cream straight from the source. Cut out all the women part...justifying I with the swapping and sharing so you can work your way into it. It's clear with your writing what you really are after.

It's perfectly fine if you wanna be gay and take a big dick up your ass. Own it.

You don't have to pretend to be a pathetic cuckold anymore...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

At least in this story they are both fucking someone else . It’s not my thing but it is hot and makes for a great story . I’m not the fan of the abused hubby as his wife takes a giant dick up her ass and they both abuse the poor small dick hubby

OGHMNWOGHMNWabout 2 years ago

Good but option 3 doesn’t seem to work for most readers. Tom and Chrystal’s none talking about the get together sounds like a weak excuse for accepting the outcome.

kencorokencoroabout 2 years ago

re: Oh well, if you don't like this kind of sh*t, you shouldn't read it.

WetheNorthWetheNorthabout 2 years ago
quote swim suite unquote

an extra vowel for sure

Show More
Share this Story

Similar Stories

He Used To Be My Idol A man's wife is seduced at a work function, by his idol.in Loving Wives
A Wife's Choice A boss takes advantage of a wife/mother and ruins a marriage.in Loving Wives
Betrayed A cheating wife leads Rob down the path of heartache.in Loving Wives
Last Anniversary Dance Husband deals with wife's cheating...in Loving Wives
I'm 51 You're never too old to start again.in Loving Wives
More Stories