All Comments on 'When The Heartache is Over'

Damn it can't the hero in somebody's tales not be rich, marry into money, have all the success possible----oh right this is fiction

Loved it and couldn't put it down.

I've read every single one of SS's stories and I believe this is the first time I actually feel bad for the guy who fucked Danny's wife. Yeah...this guy was a fuck up, and a cheater...but I actually blame Lou's wife just as much as him. He loved his wife and kids, but she simply wasn't giving him the love at home he needed, whatever her reasons. She couldn't be bothered to find out WHY she hated sex. She mentioned that his cheating destroyed her feelings for him but honestly, what man among us would tolerate a sexless marriage (or a marriage where you have sex once a month?) It's fairly obvious that she never loved him to begin with. Lou was a shithead but like I said, a small part of me did feel sorry for him.

I have to agree with Valerion's comments about Lou's wife. I was going to make some comment but think he said it all.

Good story but too many unanswered questions:

her reason for cheating has to be the most bizarre I'd heard

Why was Danny/Cal fired if his company didn't want to lose him to another company?

Why did Grace make a big deal of Lou's wife not divorcing him then having him fired?

And I never understood Grace's effort in a reconciliation

Stang, I love this story. Just re-read it tonight. It truly is your best story. Elvina is a great character who deserved to get back with her man & the schmuck Lou got his! Perfect! Ken

A very interesting and entertaining story. However, I don't really see reconciliation in this case. First, she had a real stupid reason for cheating in the first place. She wanted to work with her one true love so all she had to do was cheat with her boss. Not only cheat but act the tramp and call her one true love names and disrespect him.

Second after her one true love left, she became a whore for her boss for FIVE years so he would give her money to find her one true love. But wait, she was so moral that she never slept with a client or anyone else but her boss. It would have been nice if she was that moral for her one true love. She was definitely not a good candidate for reconciliation. I did enjoy the story until I saw the reconciliation coming.

Thanks for the writing.

As much as I enjoy Stang's stories there are some things I just can't stomach.

A spouse who cheats is preeminent among those things regardless of the supplied "reason".

Then the cheating slut spends 5 years supposedly still loving her husband, trying to find him and reunite with him.

Yet during all those years of "loving" hubby she's still fucking around on him with the same asshole.

Well that's a kind of "love" I want no part of.

Result, Wimp Cuckold takes Slut back and everyone lives happily ever after... makes me want to puke!

I must say anyone taken against their will is NOT a cheat but that didn't happen here.

MorganDeWolfe

she "f)(ked" up bad. It was her decision that drove them apart, destroyed their marriage, ruined the relationship, etc. Yes, Lou was a taker. Yes, he lied and was a manipulator. But it was her decision to sleep with him. She played along and joined in with the verbal assault on her husband.

Danny/Cal moved on. He became successful without her. He, Danny, became Cal. He did this in spite of, and without Elvina.

I wish it had concluded with a Cal, Grace, Vina happy ever after.

great story and loved the ending. it's good to see that things can come out right in the end if you just keep on trying to make it work. true love will make it happen

no one has left the building. TK U MLJ LV NV

You weave a fine tale, but her reason for fucking Lou is waaaaaaay out in left field. Her husband was talented and likely could have gotten a job in his wife's company on his own. Her reasoning that she fucked Lou so she and her husband could be together lacked credibility to me. It was however a fine story otherwise.

To the commenters: Love always conquers all else in life. Otherwise: You have very little before you go and leave it all behind. We all live a life and experience betrayals of one sort or another. We all betray those we shouldn't in one way or another. After 50 years of consecutive marriage to two different women...I am only happy that I am still in love with and loved by one. We all endure and tolerate many things as we experience life. But family and love is what we all were born to fulfill. All the rest of these opinions and stated thoughts or comments are just plain bull. Thank you for entertaining us once again, StangStar RonRwood

So,glad the end tied it all together. The first few pages had me doing a "huh?"...

I just read this story a second time and I hated it more than ever. I can't believe the wimp, ass wipe, husband took the slut bitch back. The ending made me sick. Some times Stangstar stories are rated way too high. This is one of those times.

Man I didn't see that coming. I expected your usual BTB. I love it. Keep writing sir. This is the Alphabetical Reader. I'm running out of stories. But I'll start over because I enjoy your stories so much.

Nice,beautiful story.

a second chance, a chance for redemption. No matter how bad they messed up, but only a second, not a third, fourth, fifth, sixth etc etc.

he took her back after her transgressions, I thought he had a good thing going with Grace and although the child was not her's, at least it was blood related

Please keep on writing.....did not see the ending coming...great ending.....just not sure I could take her back....

...but I it felt like one of your weaker pieces character wise. They were dumb almost to the point of caricatures in actions, thought, and love.

Mostly though it felt like there wasn't any actual growth from what should have been extremely traumatic events.

Lastly, the reason for the wife's cheating is beyond idiotic and frankly broke my suspension of disbelief.

All that said, keep 'em coming! I've read nearly every one of your stories and haven't regretted spending my time doing so :)

An odd combination of characters, events, and outcome in the plot.

Title says it all!

She cheated on him for all that time and he took her back?

What a fucking Cuckold Wimp.

Not worth any stars and a tragic waste of the readers time.

She did not recognise him?

If I did not see my ex for double the amount of time and she lost or gained a ton of weight I would recognise her a mile away with only the briefest of glances.

Good story but that part spoiled it a bit

unbelievably ridiculous RAAC bullshit

i mean matt moruea is more believable than cuckstar at this point .

she fucked her boss for 6 years ...till the day she got back together with this cuckold pussy/faggot "husband"...he knew about it ...and took her back ..?

what the ever living fuck ?

hope she gives him the aids he so richly deserves .

and i hope the author dies in a fire .

A little wordy, I think, but still a very good story. Okay, maybe it was a LOT wordy for my taste. Nine pages probably could have been cut down to five without any problem and I think the story would have been better. Hey, I'm no writer and I'm certainly not an editor, I just know what I like. 4 stars.

He spent all those years to get over her and I mean does it really even matter why she was badmouthing him while fucking her boss?

They weren't holding her baby hostage..

Still it was a good lipstick on the pig work.

Besides being a truly stupid whore with a character that could shame a goat in heat, what was attractive about Elvina?

Big miss here.

There are certain situations from where there is not way back. Trash talking and disrespecting yourhusbvand is one of them If you plan to write a reconciliation story you chose the wrong scenario. The story never woprked for me.

I never understand how a man who was hurt that much forhte p eople he loved can stay in love with her after what she did. It doesn't work either. A stupid fairytale RAAC

Good story, but I think it had about three parts fluff to one part substance. As someone else said, nine pages is way too many to tell this story.

... the big tit fetish is even more tedious and obnoxious than the mustang fetish.

Neither advance the story in any way

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Time for something else?

...no matter the theme - outcome - I love reading your stories. None are ever too long

He still has no fucking self-respect. Good luvk to him and his lying, scheming, cheating, manipulative, gold-digging, size queen whore. I'm sure next time he'll find out when she gives the dumb fucker AIDS. 1*

It's a beautiful, fantastic story, but the reason for her fucking Lou should be better. So her husband can come work with her? So that everyday he'll see the man that fucked his wife? I mean she has to be brain dead to come up with that. So K.K. needed a better reason for the "reason" to make sense.

If it's justifiable for her to fuck Lou to get her husband working with her and Cal forgives her, why isn't it justifiable for Lou to have fucked her when he is in love with his wife, but she won't let him have sex with her? Why does Lou get the shaft? Doesn's sound like he coerced her.

Also, Grace needed a better ending than being married to an invalid. She was a decent woman.

So other than those 3 things, it was a great story.

...with this beast of a story. You’ve probably disappointed a few of your hardcore fans but I for one enjoyed the switch. Don’t be too concerned about turning into another Matt Moreau, I’m sure he & his fans wrote you off along time ago.

Hope you post again!

Really like much of your work. This story was so improbable but that why it's called fiction!

StangStar stories are always great reads. Even this reconciliation story. He made me like it.

He goes with the lying, cheating slut? And what about that moron Lou? When he gets canned and fired I think he gathers up all his assets and heads for the hills. Mary got zip. Ugly story of stupidity.

1 star

No man in his right mind would take back a woman that has been fucking around on him for 5 years. No matter how bad she felt. Especially not a guy with the pride, determination, and smarts to start a massive company.

i like happy endings even RAACs but i dont think the guy u wrote out to be would take her back, unless he just took her back for a nanny with benefits type of deal. maybe because he is tired of all the scheming ass women in his life. now he has to be worried if it is all a scheme to get he fortune. i did enjoy the story though

I hated Ed Asner even before he called Charlton Heston an asshole. You do have a talent for pissing off the BTB crowd with good stories but somehow, someway, for some reason they keep reading. What's the old saying something about the definition of insanity being doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different outcome? Just keep on, keep'n on some of us are as here for you as you are for us. Signed: BTW

The victim of heinous crime against his marriage is forced to grant immunity to his wife with no redemption on her part. It seems that the phrase "I have always loved you" is is a force which permits the worst behavior. I cannot accept this diminishing of the husband's soul, by extension, the demeaning of the entire society. How flippant the repair! Take me back. All is forgiven! After all, "I LOVE YOU "!

I got a little confused in the middle but enjoyed the resolution.

Thx , Keep'em coming. I always look through the listings for your new stories.

This Cal/Danny is the worst kind of wimp character I ever heard of. SS06 you have a very creative imagination: Elvina spreaded her legs to a joker to seduce his former gf and again to her boss to get him fired. Really, I can't imagine any man that I know taking the whore back, even worst because in the way he betrayed Grace. It is inconceivable. Anyway, you kept the tension high and know how to write - good story and good imagination. For me this should be a BTB. Talking of love in this situation is bullshit.

Danny can't be a wimp, wimps don't get back up after being knocked down. I still don't understand why he took either woman back though. Betrayal after betrayal, manipulation after manipulation, and then Elvina cheats on him with that shitbag Lou. Getting him fired was bad enough, but fucking Lou to make it happen was beyond the pale. Was she trying to completely emasculate him, or was she just so selfish she couldn't see what she was doing? Either way, she didn't deserve him.

boring and why to fucking long.

Great storytelling. Danny is just another CUCK...

Very good story. Most of your stories where a wife cheats, the man gets a new girlfriend/wife. I can understand reconciliation in this case. Both the ladies schemed and got badly burned from it. excellent as always.

I truly do not understand the hate for this story. The woman was dumb. She was duped into cheating to save her husband's job. Yeah, she should have talked to him but quite frankly, she was just too believing. She continued to fuck the price for more money to find her husband.

I am a sucker for a reconciliation and if anyone deserved it, it was her. A lot of you are simply unable to grasp nuance. It's sad really. Black and white thinking tends to make people intransigent and unhappy.

This story does it. Though i love the way you write. Gave 5 stars for writing and definitely sharing.

Bjut to each his own. Your stories are just not for me.

But just can't read you anymore.

Even though you might no care but it a literary goodbye.

Another example of why this authors stories are too long ever to be any good.

Will enjoy his future of cleaning out the bulls leavings from Elvina .

One star

Well deserved

Why are you people still leaving comments, stangstar migrated from this site four years ago, it is extremely unlikely he bothers to monitor his profile on a site he no longer posts to.

For such a great author, this is the worthless, shitty type of RAAC bullshit the the others write about because they think men don't have any self respect. Letting a cheating whore back in his life is the stupidest thing there ever was!

You can tell who the Incels are. They're the ones calling Danny a cuck.

I thought it was a great story. But everyone has to have an opinion and this is mine. You think she could have come up with a better plan for Danny to work at the same place or maybe a different reason on why she had sex with her boss, like blackmail or something. For the amount of love you show her to have it seams like a reach.

I enjoyed this story. I felt with the way you written it that Danny/Cal & Elvina both screwed up; and both deserved a second chance. The ending was proper and very heart felt. Well written... thank-you.

Also, a little bit of me (very little bit of me) feels sorry for Lou. Being married to Mary who hates sex is a very tough situation to deal with. Not feeling that side of the husband/wife relationship is not right and not fair to Lou. You could say... Mary’s action caused Lou to cheat.

So many mistakes and contradictions in even a single paragraph. Definitely needed better editing. Otherwise is wasn’t too bad. Typical stang storyline.

I wanted so bad to hate it but loved it.

4 Stars on this Story . The ending killed it for Me . Their is No Way I would take that Cheating Harlot back .. I would have married Grace and called it a 5 Star story ., I would have given Lou and Vina the contract as long as She agreed to Divorce Me . I would not want Vina near My Daughter

Good story.

So bad....

This story went off the deep end. Sounds like the writer was experimenting with LSD

Had to give an extra ⭐ for the creativity as to why Vina cheated. One of the stupidest reasons I've ever heard a wife in an LW story give but, it was creative.

It's a stretch but, I can almost understand Danny forgiving her for the initial cheating once he heard the reason. I have a harder time with him taking her back knowing she had fucked her boss everyday since Danny left as her "penance".

Cuck rubbish.

Pssst!! Who are you guys expecting to read your comments, it sure as hell isn’t SS06 look at his bio ‘last modified 2015’. He posts elsewhere now.

cuuuuuuuuck

I gave this story a 3 Stars . I really did not like him taking his cheating ex back . I think it would have been better if he had married Grace

I have come to the conclusion that your MCs get cheated on because they are pathetic.

Cuck level 3 detected

"By all rights he probably shouldn't have taken me back. I was wrong as hell. But I only did the stupid thing I did because I love him so much. Even so, I probably didn't deserve this second chance at happiness. But neither of us was happy apart and we're ecstatic together. I think that on some level he knows how obsessed I am with him and keeping his love for me."

===>> this summarizes the story perfectly. She was terribly wrong to try to get Danny to work at her firm (Lou had no intention btw, hence Mary saying "he lied") by fucking Lou a few times (we don't know the exact conditions, but it wouldn't have continued once he got hired). She thought she had a scheme and Lou sensed her desperate obsession and played her. The wrinkle was when Danny saw them and heard the stupid roleplay demanded by Lou. I get that Danny was devastated, but instead of confronting her he just fled, even when Elvina came over at hyperspeed, buck naked. Elvina is not as smart as she thinks she is and her scheme to be with her husband even more of the time during the day, backfired horribly. But when your naked wife is screaming for you after racing home and wailing in the house when seeing what you left behind, the solution is to drive and never talk to her again? Huh? I know it sets the story but I guess all rational thought left Danny rhat night. Any normal person, myself included, would have confronted the two of them in the office, despite what he heard. Wtf? Given her fanatic obsession of love for Danny and her willingness to do ANYTHING to atone, I suspect they would have made it, though Lou probably would be missing some teeth and divorced. It would have taken some time and counseling, with his image of them togetger and what they said burning in his mind. In fact it would be harder than the 5 years later. His hurt was too palpable to deal with right after discovery of her sex tryst. On the other hand, it was good getting Elvina's perspective: she is not a typical cheater, she is someone who thought to use extramarital sex (which she loathed) with her boss to feed her obsessive need to be together with Danny even more of the time. Her scheme was flawed as hell and blew up in her face. She probably saw it in a similar light to when she busted up his relationship with his prior girlfriend in college and slept with the football player as payment. It was to her a throw away sacrifice to get what she wanted: Danny (or more time with Danny). Of course she was terribly wrong to do so when married. But her perspective shows that unlike so many other adulterous wives on this site, that she fervently and truly loves Danny. Not some illusionary, misguided, or false love, but truly worships him in ways few people would ever feel in their life. She made a terrible mistake by entering into a short term bargain with the lecherous, predator Lou, to feed her obsession to have more time and contact with Danny. It physically hurt her to be without Danny even during work hours. Hence her being consigned to her own personal hell when Danny left her. Even Danny recognized that she was probably in more pain than he was, when he left that night. He realized it 5 years later at rhe dinner table. The Tina Turner song could work for him. Never for her. Her fear of losing him probably comes from her father leaving her mother. It is a fear that defines her every action. The author does a good job of showing her pain. For those who think he should have ended up with Grace: honestly Grace's betrayal is just as bad or orse, and Grace even owns up to that. Besides he never loved Grace at all like he lived Elvina. Gracce saw how much Danny was hurting but was herself so enamored with him that she set out to claim him for her own despite Danny's inability to move on from his wife. Her mistake that led to her sister raping Danny (and yes he thought it was Elvina) and him being stuck with an infant, was pure Greek tragedy. A mistake, yes, but like Elvina, a scheme that backfired, but instead of a hand grenade, it was a nuclear bomb. Worse, instead of sticking around to fix it, she did what Danny did and fled the scene and got hooked up with another guy, then ending up in a strained marriage out of guilt. I can see Danny forgiving Elvina because her mistake was so implausibly dumb that it had to be true. My problem with the story is why the author decided that she would agree to be put in a situation where Lou continued to fuck her for five years (from which she never got an orgasm) virtually every day at work because she needed the money for PIs and to keep her job. That was stupid and demeaning to Elvina. A sick, twisted penance. Elvina would have done anything to find Danny but she could have easily turned the tables on the douchebag, and threatened to tell his wife or file a sexual harassment suit against the company if she didn't keep her job and he didn't pay for her PI expenses (neither realizing the frigid wife Mary already knew). With the blackmail, she could have extorted what she needed and still been at the company with Lou to go to Hawaii years later. I felt sad for Elvina. She was so in love with Danny that she debased herself with the sleazy predator Lou in some twisted transactional manner to keeping looking for Danny. Seriously, she had blackmail leverage on Lou. She could have easily gone in one more time, fucking Lou for 15 minutes, and gotten a recording. Maybe the wife would have intervened but then Elvina could still threaten the lawsuit and get her husband fired, which would not have fit into Mary's long term plans. She had leverage. Instead she was forced to fuck her boss umpteen times as a form of dark penance (author's choice). I am glad that Grace got them back together. The twist with Grave and her niece was interesting. Anyways Elvina was not a bad person or self-centered bitch or any if the myriad other LW tropes on this site. She stupidly schemed to what she was certain was the benefit of their marriage to be together even more often, being fueled by her obsession for her husband, not some strange dick, or trading up, or an itch, to advance her career, to gain money, or live her dream. Her dream was Danny and she fucked it up, but she was able to find him in the end. Once she was able to talk to him, albeit years removed, it was not hard for him to forgive her. Her need and his, was basically primal. I think the author wanted to explore a marriage defined by true love that in the wife's case was an obsession. But that the wife broke it up because of an unbelievably dumb (yet creative) reason and spent her time trying to find him to reconcile. While she hurt him badly, it was not malicious and she never got a chance to explain. His love for her was so strong that he felt completely betrayed. But despite five years apart (during which she had her nightmare penance with Lou), true love overcomes their past. Normally this would be a 4 stars given some implausible parts and her stupidity but the twist with Grace and Elva adn seeing Elvina's perspective, brings it to a 5 stars.

Wait! All was going great until the end; what happened with Grace and Manny? Does Elvina share Danny? Seems like there is more to this story. A follow-up perhaps?

Thought the story was very well written 5* from me.

Mfj

Someone wrote a huge justification for why she cheated except the whore never stopped. Taking back a woman who was unfaithful is one thing fucked if I would but whatever. This cunt not only cheated but kept on cheating the ex-husband would have to be fucking insane to take this skank back.

And the fact his partner has faithfully been there for him since they got together shows what a pathetic piece of cuckshit he really is 😳

Reading this was like witnessing an auto accident. It’s horrible but you can’t look away. This story was much longer than it needed to be. I actually skipped a bunch of pages in the middle. In this story, the word “love” was thrown around a whole lot while there were almost zero examples of real love. I don’t know how one would label the emotions, but calling it love is a fucking joke.

At xchristianj: if you read the Anon's comment (it is long). he/she complains in fact that Elvina continuing to fuck the asshole to get money for PIs and to keep her job, makes no sense and is demeaning to her character and doesn't fit at all why she started the arrangement to begin with. In fact she had leverage over the asshole for sexual harassment or blackmail forcing the company's hand to settle..That was the whole point. The continued indentured servitude was a cheap lazy way for the author to keep.her miserable and trapped. But have to admit she had a mental issue with her obsession with her (ex-)husband and her reason for cheating with her boss was insane but unique.

While I enjoyed the story, like many others I find the way the Elvina’s affair started not realistic, nor the fact that she continued to screw here boss after the loss of her husband, which she loved so much.

The continuation of the affair with her boss was the worst of the plot and to have it so easily dismissed by her husband at the end just underscores the unbelievable realistic notion within the story line.

While I’ve found the author to be one of the best here on Literotica, he tends to screw up at a times with a totally unbelievable story line. I do enjoy his sense of humor, but I want things to be believable. I have know problems excepting some type of Star Trek future if it is back with science, but no man or woman will tolerate the extreme hurt, humiliation and disrespect that many of the characters in so many of the stories that are posted of Literotica. Some authors, for whatever reason chose to screwup their plot, it’s like they are taking advice from a thirteen year old kid.

I can't even begin to express my disappointment in how this one fell off the cliff

This is the worst SS06 story I ever remember reading. Hell it's one of the worst stories of any author I read all year, and this says something. The fact that the author decided that the woman who ACTUALLY loved the guy deserved punishment while the conniving whore who doesn't even understand what love is and is toxic as hell, got rewarded. This is the opposite of karma. And the dumb trope of him pining for the evil bitch for years is as grating as it is stupid and unrealistic.

Nope did not like the story

Danny and Grace made a better couple

How many thousands of times did she cheat on him? She wore out her fucking pussy cheating on her husband. Fuck!

Elvira (WTF kind of name is that?) didn't deserve to be forgiven, too bad Grace went a little stupid as well. One could have hoped this story could have been a lesson to people (read WOMEN) not to do the manipulation/scheming routine as it's a truly hateful thing to do to someone you supposedly love.

Nope

Beurk. Vous nous avez habitué à mieux SS06 . Très déçu.

4 Stars as the wife did cheat .. I think that Elvira and my ex are hanging out together

Weird motive. She was that obsessed with her husband. However, the author did her a disservice by having her keep screwing Lou for five years with zero attraction, pleasure or attachment. He wasn't even a functioning dildo for her. The premise that she would do that based on needing money for PIs is just surreal. Yea this is fiction but would anyone do that in that situation? Would think she would tell Lounto go to hell and file a sexual harassment case. Nowadays she would win, settle and use the proceeds to pay the PIs. Her husband just left her everything anyways. They didn't have a lot but that could be used also. Besides in a situation like this, would be 95% digital. Cast and lay out nets / webs and see what comes out. Expensive but not like hiring a gumshoe PI to follow people around for months. Having her continue to be screwed by Lou to dangle the promise of enough money to keep hiring PIs is definitely her punishment and her weird penance. Felt sorry for her as she is clear really stupid. But continuing to use her multiple times a week for five years is just stomach churning. And she just accepts it because she is obsessed with finding her husband. There were other alternatives. But then again she is as dumb as a bag of rocks.

Bravo. Well developed story. Outstanding little tale.

All the best,

Dave

Poor Lou, yes it was partly his fault. But he didn't deserve all that did he? It was all the scheming on the wife's part, he felt for her boobs and beauty, and before her since he was already unfaithful he did it again. He was not getting it from his wife marry. He should have probably divorced her but if he did we wouldn't have a story.

I enjoyed the story. I was a bit non-plussed by Elvina still having sex with Lou. Even if she viewed it as horrible and an end to a means (finding Danny) - I don't know how she managed to do justify it really. I have noticed that in your reconciliation ending stories, the characters overall are a bit more sympathetic, although Elvina still seems to suffer from your classic "too dumb to live" trait on the cheating wife front. I mean, really, her plan was retarded. You should have made Lou more a villain and had him blackmail her, then her continuing to have sex with him would have felt like more of a punishment rather than a choice because she didn't want to cough up another 12k a year in PI fees by working a couple nights or weekends a week at McDonalds.

Muy buena historia, además bien escrita y los toques de humor e ironía, la hacen más atractiva de leer.

While yes Elvina brought on all her own troubles, the character in this I would like to see drawn and quartered is her father (a self-center, worthless, uncommitted, shallow piece of filth) he destroyed his loving wife and corrupted his daughters character through his lack of character, may he burn in hell for all eternity.