All Comments on 'Where I'm Supposed to Be'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Thanks Bebop, for a great story. I have to admit that the last couple of pages about Mateo were so strong that I almost forgot about Camille screwing him over. Thanks for sharing. BTW, you’re right about PapaToad’s story Telephone Blitz. It’s one of the first stories I read here and it’s funny as hell.

Five stars.

ncdeepdiverncdeepdiver4 months ago

Great story and fantastic ending. One of the few stories where I thought the ending being "less" was actually more!!

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I'm about 55,000 words into Secondhand Hearts, a new story in the Hop on the Bus series. If I can figure out a way to post it here without it being stolen and posted on Amazon, I should have it ready in about a week or so. There's someone who has stolen about eight of my stor...