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Jessica ran her fingers thru the long, sweaty strands of her hair and tugged down the cheerleading top.
"Ok, don't be afraid, but I know what you've been doing," she said with an unreadable expression.
"What? But...for how long?"
"After that first night in your room. I went back to my room and started thinking about the relaxation room and stuff. At first I was upset. I came home early before you got back from your classes the next day and I searched your room. I found your journal."
Oh god. My life was over. If she found my journal then she had all the proof she needed to end my life. I couldn't breathe. I must have looked like I felt, because Jessica reached over and gently took my hand.
"Calm down Bry. Like I said, at first I was angry. But then I started reading. And you kept talking about how beautiful and sexy you thought I was and, well, I realized that whatever it was in you that made you feel attracted to me was in me to.
"When I thought about it, really thought about it, I realized I didn't care that you were my brother. I mean, you're sexy and good in bed and..."
Jessica trailed off. I just stared, dazed. We sat there in silence for a while. Finally, I swallowed and spoke thru the cotton balls in my mouth.
"So...you like...what we're doing?"
Jessica smiled. "Yah. It's fun and I'm on the pill so, what the hell, right?"
"But you must have known we might get caught..."
Jessica grimaced, her eyes flicking to the stairwell.
"Yah. I was pretty worried about that. But I read about the post-hypnotic suggestions you'd been working on with mom and dad so..." She let it hang there for a second.
"Plus I figured that even if they did catch us the worst that would happen is that dad would kick you out of the house. I mean, it's not like they're gonna rush to tell anyone else about it."
I let out a ragged breath. "No, I suppose not."
"You know," Jessica said, sliding into my lap, "I got accepted to your college. It was kind of a safety school, but maybe we could move out and get an apartment together."
I was still pretty bewildered at the turn of events, but I wrapped my arms around Jess, considering, as she put her head on my shoulder.
"Yah," I said after a little reflection. "Yah, that could be fun."
"Maybe I'll even stop taking my birth control," she whispered in my ear, her hand sliding down.
I knew this was just part of our game, but I found myself responding anyways. A whole world of possibilities was suddenly opening in front of me.
The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoGave it 5 stars. Long build up, but steamy payoff at the end. Well done. Would read more of your work.
Synsitiveabout 5 years agoSuper fuckin hott and awesome story. I absolutely loved it. I hope u write plenty more. I’m sure I’m going to read thru the ones you’ve written fairly quickly if they’re all this amazing!! You’re very talented.
honybipolaabout 7 years agohot sibling romance...you have a talent there so write more stories like this one...
Anonymousover 7 years agoI've had a thing for my baby sister for years, if I could use hypnosis to make her realize that her philandering husband does not treat her like she deserves and I would, well I'd be tempted.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoQuetzalcoatl is the Aztec god of wind and learning. The wind part I get, especially in light of the brief/filibuster you foisted on your readers in the guise of a warning/prologue. Perry Mason tendencies notwithstanding, I fully believe that fewer words made up the constitution of the US. In any event If not fewer they were more meaningful in the extreme than this verbose persiflage under the guise of legal language.
If only you had spent as much time on polishing up this, your first first-draft purporting to be a completed story. As a first effort it is not without its virtues, with focus and attention to necessary detail notable exclusions. But, errors/omissions
such as these stand as mute reminders of areas for improvement:
thru (through) (12)
someone goes to a hypnotherapist to stop smoking it doesn't work if they (he/she)
hypnotize someone it's important to observe (-their) (his/her) behavior and put (-them) (him/her) at ease by reciprocating any emotions (-they) (he/she) (-are) (is) feeling
stair case (staircase)
timeframe (time frame)
over eager (overeager)
dinner time (dinnertime)
role play (roleplay)
like (to) know about him
younger than them (they)
moiré (more)
just a big (-is) change was all
Sundays (sundaes)
losers (loser’s)
spot light (spotlight)
god help (God)
me feeling attracted (to) you
full court press (full-court)
site of my little sister (sight)
was in me to (too)
You have talent as a writer. Do yourself a favor and avoid hiding it under a pile of dross and detritus!!!!
Anonymousover 8 years agoMy biggest issue was your use of the words "yah" and "thru" as they aren't real words. I sincerely hope that the reason for this was not that you couldn't type those few extra letters, and was instead a mere oversight on your part.
