Wish Granted Ch. 08

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"Ah! Lillitu!"

Oh yes. Her wish would certainly be granted.

Lillitu was imagining the future as her tongue scraped up and down the other woman's quivering little hole over and over, earning uncertain yet undoubtedly pleased little moans from the seated woman. She tasted like spicy confections and rose water. Lillitu was relieved to know she wasn't unpleasant to the senses.

"Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh!" Poor Bethaline. She had apparently not known this was something one could do. Well, what a surprise this must have been!

Lillitu let the tip of her tongue swirl about her needy little clitoris and then went back to lapping at her. Bethaline's perspiration was rushing into her nose and filling her lungs.

Then she carefully slid two fingers into her, noting the tight, spasming muscles that clung to her digits.

"Aaaaahh!" Bethaline's breaths seemed to overlap.

Lillitu lightly pressed her tongue against the clit. Then she curled her fingers and pressed upward, searching for a classic little spot. Those inner muscles seemed to panic. They pulsed and throbbed as if wounded, making squishing little noises. Bethaline's legs and thighs trembled. Her skirts were swishing in an undignified rhythm. Lillitu tried not to snort out her amusement.

Instead, she put her lips against the clitoris and suckled.

"Yes! Yes! YES!!" The oh so haughty, oh so persnickety Bethaline was mirthfully announcing her pleasure to the woman she had spent five years not speaking to, to the woman's whose dear friend she had refused and renounced, to the woman she liked to pretend she hated. "Oh ... please, oh please! PLEASE!!"

And Bethaline's muscles seemed to quiver and spurt a little bit of liquid out. Her body rocked. Then it froze. Then it went limp.

Lillitu decided to pull herself away from the moist pussy and slide up Bethaline's form. She kissed Bethaline's nose and said, "Maybe you should run on home, before you misplace your brain."

"Huh?"

Lillitu winked and rose to her feet, idly licking at her fingers. "I'm sending you home, silly girl. Go on, then."

She wasn't surprised when Bethaline smoothed her clothing into its proper order and left the room.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The person who made the first comment,

No no, please don't apologise! I'm terribly sorry, I should've paid more attention. :) Actually, English isn't my first language so I didn't know the meaning of bethroved - not something I've seen people use in daily life. I thought it meant married. But, I'm learning, thanks for replying. You have exceptional writing skills also, I read the story Baby Doll in just one sitting - all chapters! :D

Keep writing, you're amazing!

To the other person who commented: Hey, see, I came back before reading the next chapter, yo. B)

AethurAethuralmost 7 years ago
To Dreamer - Don't apologize

It was clear to me that she was her bethroved, and she broke it off after the fire. I don't think you need to respond to questions like that, as other readers will. And who knows if the poster will even go back to see if someone replied to him.

Enjoying the story. Keep up the good work.

DreamerByTheDiamondsDreamerByTheDiamondsalmost 7 years agoAuthor
To the first comment ...

I don't like responding to comments, because I firmly believe that everyone has the right to say whatever they want, and I'm afraid of seeming like a thin-skinned, whiny special snowflake that can't take criticism. However, I'll make an exception, just so I can explain something. Erdgar was never married to Bethaline. They were betrothed. They were engaged to marry, but Bethaline broke off the relationship. They never did the dizzly-do. They could have, but they didn't. I probably didn't make this clear enough. I'm terribly sorry. I'm glad to admit my own fault in this. I'll try to be clearer in my writing in the future. Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate your feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wait,

Does that mean Erdgar and his ex-wife never slept together?

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