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John nodded and knew better to point out they'd panicked. Not that he might have done any better in that situation. He frowned and looked around the room. They were looking at him, guarded hope in their eyes. He swallowed and nodded. Feigning a confidence he didn't feel he said, "Let me go share that with my friends. We'll come up with a plan to make sure nobody else gets taken."
I'm seeing a trend in people complaining about the length of the chapters. Sorry, not sorry. Chapter length is important to a book for pacing. I suspect the real complaint is only getting weekly (or less frequent) postings. Or maybe you I'm clueless and wrong. Your opinion is yours and everyone has a right to feel how they feel - I won't argue that. However, as the dude who wrote the book, I'll post as, and when, I can. I'll keep posting this story (we're almost halfway through, btw), and others too.
- COMMENTS
Suggestionalmost 3 years agoGood story. When the man opened the door, it got a little confusing as to who was doing what. Be careful with pronouns when there are a large number present. I read it over a couple times and still did not get it clear. A good editor will catch these things for you.
You have a good style. You are right to release it at a pace that you are comfortable with. For a serial like this, your chapter length is not unreasonable.
Keep up the good work.
maddictalmost 3 years agoWicked story. I'm not sure I've caught the very beginning of John's story. I started when John didn't know who he was, and I might of missed the last chapter. It's hard to keep up on Literotica, if they had a follow list. $$$$
nthusiasticalmost 3 years agoIgnore Complaints
We may be greedy, but we’re still grateful for whatever crumbs you toss our way. Thank you.
(I’ve also tried to let several chapters accumulate in order to facilitate my subsequent binge, however my cravings won’t let me …)
