by saddletramp1956
25 years!, that’s ridiculous murderers and rapists get that amount of time. Not one of your better stories, for me anyway
Another mother in law cunt Linda who wants the victim to reconcile with the cheating skank daughter!! What the fuck is wrong with the whores parents with " CAN'T YOU GET PASSED THIS"
Enjoyed the story but had some problems with it. 1) Why didn't Heather's parents tell her about her twin brother? Moreso, why didn't they mention she's adopted & the circumstances around that? One thing to not tell a young child, another not to tell at least a teen after 15 or so.
2) Linda kept trying to get hubby to reconcile & I suppose, to accept her marriage. At least reconcile. Question unasked: how would SHE feel if her husband went off & repeated her daughter's actions? Doubt she'd be too accommodating.
3) The jail sentence Steve got. Even tho fraud & bigamy, 25yrs is still overboard. Murderers & drug pushers deserve that, not what Steve did, however grossly wrong it was. AND he HAD to know that she's married; after all, he was to her house. Unless Heather straight out lied to him, but I'd imagine Steve asking why she's living with the unnamed husband.
4) I didn't read the original story. But irregardless, I don't see hubby's name anywhere!
>> All that doesn't excuse Heather's actions. She KNEW she's married & still married Steve. Nor does it excuse his actions as he knew Heather's his twin sister. And it also, to a lesser extent, doesn't excuse Linda for trying to get the husband to reconcile! For a professional, she's totally off the mark. Was planning on giving this 4 stars, but after writing the above, I'm reducing this to 3 stars. A rarity for ST1956 stories. Bob