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Click hereI was hooked on the first chapter. The guy was just shy, or dumb, but a great way to build up the tension and empathy. Great little story - although not sure what the surprise was; I was waiting for an unhappy ending (glad it was ‘happy’ though).
The pillow talk and giggling you do is wonderful! You paint a good picture. Not doing the typical blow job at first was fun. I like hearing the woman squirm and moan more sexy. The build up of the story was worth the wait. Especially, how vulnerable she was and the guy didn't get it. Or maybe he did..
Once again Eve, you did a phenominal job. It was hard to believe you weren't right next to me. You make it a real experience much more then just telling a story. I just hope you keep up your great work,