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To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Marklynda2almost 2 years agoI would trust a dog more than a lot of people!
Another interesting chapter. Enjoying the build up and character background. I'm sure once we get to the sex it will be equally entertaining. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
JasonRTaylorover 9 years ago...but very enthusiastic. The excitement is palpable in his random and regular segues and thought-streams.
An enjoyable read :)
Naughtyirish40about 11 years agoThe comment about that pacing right, you hit the nail on the head with it
docrobover 11 years agoThe foundation has been laid. Now the sexual tension rises. Great pacing.
hornycolalmost 12 years agoi have just read chapter 18 on mum gets nude... are u going to keep me on the edge of my seat as long with this story?????
great writing.
Innuendosalmost 12 years ago"You are nothing but a loser, loser."
With solidly entertaining fights like that, the one-liners aren't required to be devastatingly witty, and even adds a little realism to the moment. Great job! Enjoying the story so far and looking forward to more.
