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Click hereIf I was to give a name to you
but that would only give you life
more than seeing where you grew
before submitting to the knife.
But that would only give you life
to own me and to take your toll
before submitting to the knife,
defeating you becomes my goal.
To own me and to take your toll
life's undiscriminating scares
defeating you becomes my goal
although you caught me unawares.
Life's undiscriminating scares
more than seeing where you grew,
although you caught me unawares
I will not give a name to you.
Great poem here : my heartfelt prayers to Mother Kali to keep you safe , sound & healthy ....( am determined Not to put any exclamation marks here ) BTW i 5-ed .
There's a great tension between the emotion of the subject and the determination of the narrator to keep emotion under control. It works really well here (and you know I am wishing for the best for you.) xx