- Erotic Poetry
- August Moon...
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I can taste the HEAT
feel the rivulets of sweat
washing my body
numbing my soul
sense the thunder's ripple
the searing storm's flash
the inevitable rush to
the knowing end
as muscle and flesh contract
while the inward eyes expand.
The head tilts back
lips agape as emotion spews
and the tidal force rips humanity away
as the primal scream escapes...
The following silence -
palpable
full
electric
complete
...renewing.
The August Moon
bright with reflections
of tomorrow's sun
shimmering
shivering
calling forth from unknown depths
the being that I am
the ALL that I am
for better or worse
til eyes softly close
and the breathing evens
the essence of peace
pervades again
prevails again
the essence of the world
returns
again.
Chris Twyford
Ancient117331
08/30/2004
- COMMENTS
BlueskyBeautyover 19 years agoi thought this was a good poem, could maybe make it a bit more crisp by doing away with some words not needed...
but i'm not 1 to be able to talk..i do it all the time. lol
keep writing! ty!
Maria2394over 19 years agoI like the image you present of the universe breathing, very effective :)
