beyond the gray

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bluerains
bluerains
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passion relinquishes its glow
once ignited by illusion
souls turn ashen
amidst autumn winds
gray sweeps outer beauty
drawing death shadows
life rekindles within
an enchanted kiss
as center of stimulation
dawns
final destination
of inner symmetry

bluerains
bluerains
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
HOW DOES THE SOUL LACK COLOR

if one is among its carers. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Mystical

The flow was nice. Your beautiful magic words poignant and delicate.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Haiku on steroids?

Perhaps, but than that describes much of what you write.

I prefer to hear the message here

As all beauty lies within

And when the world turns gray

Vision's turned inward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yes, the soul does speak outside the cage.

Great exprssion of what can go on inside-this soul cage.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Haiku...

...on steriods. Works for me.

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