In the Old Farm Attic

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Well we didn’t mean to find it

I mean it was in the attic of the old farmhouse that we bought
a trunk behind some old boxes of books and
magazines and clippings and farm clothes and boots
and stuff like that
You could almost taste that old musty smell of attic and decay

We really just went for the trunk when we emptied the attic
It was old enough to be worth something or keeping
if we cleaned it up
but when we cut the lock
we had no clue
to the combination and didn’t care anyway
and dumped it out
we found letters and pictures
a journal and poems

lots of poems

We cleaned up the trunk
and sold the pictures

The letters and poems
we use to start the wood stove
on the cold mornings when we need it

We are thinking of keeping the barn
and tearing down the house
It is worth more
and who cares about a hermit who
scribbled

His dog is buried by the walnut tree
where the squirrels play

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Playful squirrels

A very interesting look at what happens after people have passed. Although, you can be sure that the squirrels would rather celebrate your poetry and save your writings from the fire than frolick over your dog's grave ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Playful squirrels

A very interesting look at what happens after people have passed. Although, you can be sure that the squirrels would rather celebrate your poetry and save your writings from the fire than frolick over your dog's grave ;)

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
This flowed almost like...

...afterthoughts... were scattered in flawless haphazard form. I hope you know what I mean. <smile> The excitement of the trunk's discovery, then the melancholy; then the cool indifference to nostalgic familial memories when the poetry was used as kindling for the fire really grabbed Me. That unique tumultuous style deserves a "5" all in itself - and got it. Very nice work, Reltne.

Vixxx

sacksackalmost 19 years ago
delightfully different

The unsentimental quality of the writing is almost painful, but is all the stronger for that. A rather rarely used topic which you handled very well.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
almost speechless......

very nicely done......but i like this spot as my favorite......

The letters and poems

we use to start the wood stove

on the cold mornings when we need it

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