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Click hereYou taint this body with unbidden, binding
tabletop thoughts. Spread out
a leisure morphing of partially taken pathways
teeth sinking bites, into the bountiful boudoir
of coy glances interceded in the exchanging
of secret blushes. I follow your patch
of sprinkling hair to the rivers edge, while I sup
and gather liquid courage to forgo it all
and just feast on you forever.
Your words paint vivd and evocative images.
Rhymeville must be quite a place.
Great stuff, Heather, good use of imagery and your language has a nice musicality to it.
love and hugs
V/D
xx
nice write (~_~)definitely an excellent literary journey <grin you would win altmania with this write <grin, I had no idea it was your poem (~_*)
well-chosen, well-ordered ajectives/phrases; very seductive indeed! Nicely done!