Awkward "Us"

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Something's wrong
Something's amiss
Something's different
In the way you kiss

The way you hold me
Isn't as tight
The way you hold me
Just doesn't feel right

When you're here
It isn't as long
When you leave
It just seems wrong

Let me know
All is okay
Let me know
It's still "our" day

Let me know
You still want me
Just let me know
There is a "we"

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A DESCRIPTION OF "WE"

me n you, us, not thirds. TK U MLJ LV NV

champagne1982champagne1982almost 17 years ago
almost

a song lyric. You should consider finding a musical partner and see if you can make a hit. Thanks for sharing.

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
Again,

I detect truth and honesty in your work that I feels comes from deep within. Nicely put together.