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SunrockSin
SunrockSin
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loosely
must if
you ask
that wonder
I if
pro
portion

isn’t lacking
feigning once
something
mon u
mental

and yet
dare I don’t
off her
measure
C or
more may
be D

cup
full hand
sure for
but look
don’t
at me

 

SunrockSin
SunrockSin
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BRAS BANS NABS

peekers and seekers. TK U MLJ LV NV

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Tip toeing between the lines

Is when your brain tells your eyes to go take a lesson at the nearest ballet studio. Poems allow this kind of play wi5th sound and meaning within and across lines -only poems never prose could do it. Thank you much for the talented wordsmith here.

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Spare and finely wrought

The phrasing made me think of ee cummings, a little. It's a very spare piece of writing, tight-reined, but you convey a lot with it. Well done!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Unusual look at full hands engaged in task monumental.

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