- Erotic Poetry
- Aches
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My eyes ache to behold you in their sight.
My lips ache to feel your kisses pressing tight.
I ache to whisper "I love you" in your ears.
My loneliness for you fills my eyes with tears.
My arms ache to hold you in tender embrace
I want to see the ache of desire in your face.
My breast aches to feel your loving caress
Only your love can bring these aches to rest.
My pelvis aches to feel yours pressed to mine
These aches get stronger with the passage of time.
My cunt aches with loneliness for your cock.
This ache intensifies with each tick of the clock.
My whole being aches with want of you
And only your touch and love will do.
I ache to hear you whisper "I love you".
I need these things to carry me through.
- COMMENTS
Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoAh, the pain of love.
A good piece.
A small suggestion: fourth line, 1st stanza:
My loneliness for you fills my eyes with tears.
might be better if:
My longing for you fills my eyes with tears.
Also the 3rd line, 3rd stanza jarred. Throughout the poem you evoke tight kisses, tender embraces and loving embrace. Then we have this line with the not so romantic Cock and Cunt. I would replace it with something like:
In a sea of lonliness you are my rock.
My ache intensifies with each tick of the clock.
