- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Sweet Dreams
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He says it to me every night.
I close my eyes,
To shut out the light.
"Sweet dreams", he whispers.
I rest my cheek,
Against his whiskers.
"Sweet dreams", he says, again.
I kiss him softly,
On the chin.
"Sweet dreams, and rest well."
I drift off,
Under his spell.
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Please vote, and feel free to leave public comments. Your feedback is always welcome. Wishing you and yours, sweet dreams forevermore.
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I am Yours SINSerely,
Babs
- COMMENTS
JWrenover 9 years agoSo warm and cuddly and loving. Couldn't fail to fall into contented sleep. Well done, Babs.
Senna Jawaabout 12 years agoGreat climate, nice mood.
Just one line is weak:
"To shut out the light."
for two reasons. 1. Just state things, don't explain (that "to" is the culprit). And 2. the combination of closing eyes and thus shutting the lights out is not interesting. Avoid such obvious combinations, almost repetitive.
Overall, I like your poem. As others said, it's sweet in a very nice way.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoHey Bar,
Great poem, punctuated nicely...
made me smile. Oh, and what Dh said too. : )~
Austin
driphoneyabout 12 years agoWhat a darling little poem, SINS. You did a great job of capturing a special moment between partners. Thanks for sharing. :)
