- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Conscience
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Though power will evade most people's grip
and tempt them from a distance, we can tell
you're turning
to your fair share of the block, a chip
or more - but do remember it's for hell
you're yearning:
too soon you'll feel the cracking of the whip
on naked flesh and there will be a smell
of burning.
- COMMENTS
Tsothaover 10 years agoI like the format and the message in your poem. Although I cannot possibly know the full meaning behind your words, I'd leave a counter-thought: sometimes power is just a way to defend oneself. Who can say what the "fair share of the block" is? We're taught that we get what we deserve, but the truth is that you seldom get things done just by waiting for others to remember you.
Oldbear63over 10 years agoyou used - different, so very concise and clear - my comments would be an echo of the greenmountainer's.
tazz317over 10 years agoever overcome conscience and behavior. TK U MLJ LV NV
twelveooneover 10 years agowant the t-shirt?
congrats, something different
again same question why are your comments so anemic?
surely if you can put this into verse...
ah, never mind
5ed
