- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Blushing Lucy
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Her petals were barely open, just enough
to catch a tantalizing glimpse
of palest pink, wherein a dewdrop
of moisture glistened in the awakening dawn.
As I gazed in transfixed wonder
she slowly opened when I lowered
my face to breathe her sweet perfume
delicate in her newness, before joy of life
sent her tumbling over the trellis.
Oh Blushing Lucy the sweetest Rose of all.
- COMMENTS
Magnetronover 9 years agoBeautiful. And a lot classier than something similar that I wrote eons ago.
Sent her tumbling over the trellis
Oh, if only I could think that poetically.
greenmountaineerover 9 years agoI liked the suggestiveness of this, UYS. I might have chosen a different adjective than "transfixed" because it seemed redundant with "wonder."
As always, you know how to pack alot into few words.
